this story is so cool, not just for the amazing writing, but also because my name is Dee too! (although it's short for Deirdre, not Normandy).
can't wait for the next update :)

Author's Response: I love the name Dee :)
I wouldn't name a daughter it though, but I WOULD name them something where Dee could be a nickname you know? I find it endearing :D
Anywho, thanks for reviewing!!

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Great first chapter! Such a shame you're re-writing it all! I can't wait any longer! I really love Dee's character - very sarcastic, but who am i to judge? :D Please update soon!
10/10!
Becky :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I wanted her to have more of edge this time around. Glad you liked

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I really love it! The old version was good too, but this one is amazing :)

Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad you think so. the old version just left me with nowhere to go.. not to mention it was horribly and hastily written. i hope more people like this version better, so thanks :)

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haha this was really funny. i liked this chapter. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: thank you once again for reviewing every chapter!! hopefully you will reread this story once i rewrite it. it will be much better by that time, i swear :)

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couldn't she have just told patrick what was going to happen so he would be prepared. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: this story makes no sense -.-

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i agree. zac efron is yummy. 9/10 =]

Author's Response: ahhh he totally is!!

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this wasn't the best chapter but it was alright. 8/10 =]

Author's Response: yeah, i know, this story doesn't include some of my best work :/ but i love the idea so much that i could either just abandon it and leave it here or rewrite so i could continue. i'm choosing the latter!!

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i liked your other story so much that i decided to read another. this was a great start!! 9/10 =]

Author's Response: thanks! this story actually sucks really badly, so i'm working on a rewrite of it.

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I love this story sososososo much!!! i cant wait for the next chapter seiously!!! and i cant help but love and hate James at the same time, hes so annoying!!! grrreeat story and chapter !! xx

Author's Response: haha thank you! i'm actually planning on rewriting this story.. so when i begin that and starting updating that, i hope you'll like that too :) thanks for reviewing!

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dude that's so funny! can't wait for her and james to get together now that she's not really crushing on patrick anymore. yeah, so please right more to this, i'll be looking for it!

Author's Response: thank you!
i'll try my best to get it up soon!!

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course i'll review. good, of course, and i think that ickle jamesey might have a bit of a crush here. *waggles eyebrows*

Author's Response: yup he just doesnt know it yet.. or does he?
DUM DUM DUM

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writer's block IS dumb. the quality of your writing is not affected, though. it's still really good.

Author's Response: why thank you so much :)
that's nice to..read :D

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nope, not suckish. awesome. reading the next chapter now, so bye!

Author's Response: bye, but i think we shall say hello again :)

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not horrible, but good! i would right more, but reading the next chapter is higher up on my To Do list.

Author's Response: hehe, no worries.
thanksss :)

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Awesome chapter! I just have one questions, is this a James II/OC story? Anyways love the story! Update soon!

Author's Response: yeah!!
it is :)
it's confusing, i know, but it will become more clear in the next couple of chapters!!

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WOW. okay, the detention was creative- how they got out of it at least. and the thing with patrick -oops! I'm starting to wonder about the focus of the romance here, but i do hope patrick gets back with olive. he really seemed to like her.

Author's Response: it's still a james/dee story, no worries. olive and patrick will be alright. haha the next chapter.. that i haven't written yet (but have planned out so dont fret!).. sort of begins to focus on dee and james.

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Aw! I feel so bad for Patrick! And Dee really is kind, for trying to stop the prank so he doesn't get hurt.

Author's Response: Dee's got this soft spot that she doesn't really like people to see hehe
I'm glad you like it so far!! And thanks for reviewing every chapter for this story along with failure by design! it's muchly appreciated(:

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aw. I was thinking Just different houses. can you imagine if they DID do slytherins and Gryffindors together??? and any other random house combos? SO MUCH CHAOS! but hey, in relation to the general story: so far it's looking great! there isn't a clear direction yet, but that's fine because intro are important. if you don't have a backstory, you can't put actual meaning into the mainideas! There is plenty of material to work off of, and quite a few directions to go in!

Author's Response: i'm glad you're like it! this story wasn't my best writing, and i'm ever considering re-writing it (because i love the idea, just wish i had pulled it off better haha). so thanks!

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i'm imagining what would have happened if Dee ate the berries anyway and Al walked in on her kissing James... maybe it's a good thing that didn't happen?

Author's Response: at this point, james wouldn't stand for that to happen so he would of broken it off haha, thats why im sort of stretching out their relationship. so yeah, its a very good thing that didnt happen!

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hmmm. I smell a romance. hehehehe. :)

Author's Response: i hope it smells nice haha :)

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patrick fisk. HAHA!
sry i cant stop laughing at that!
fisk = fish in swedish :D

Author's Response: Oh, I had no idea :)
I just stole the last name from a singer named Schuyler Fisk. Hehe

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well, this could work to their advantage if they are the first person they see when they eat them. And lololol at her being knocked into his abs

Author's Response: haha james or patrick?
she wont be snogging james.. yet.
and trust me when i say the snogberries will come into action for that escapade as well :)

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lmao That last line was hilarious :)

Author's Response: thank you!!

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Hi. :)
I only just started reading this story and I have to say that I really like it. :)
Patrick is cute. I love cute guys and having Zac Efron as the cute guy is like the cherry on the cake.
:)
I can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thanks!
Yes, Zac Efron is rather cute. And so is Patrick. Heheh thanks for reviewing!

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put up a new chapter ASAP! i love the story so far, but i need more!

Author's Response: next chapter is already in the queue :)

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