This is a good story, however you should add more details, and there are many grammatical errors. Other than that, great story

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I love this please update soon! (:

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pleas hurry with more!1

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I love this story so far! It is making me feel happy inside and cry! Which is a good thing! Keep writing!!!

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Woesh, I found your story about an hour ago, and already you make me a fan! I really like your story! And scorpius is just adorable! I´m glad Draco is back!

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Ha, since when does the crazy bug need 'details' to write something? Why not just make something up? ... Well, I might have given it away - I am no fan of Skeeter ^^
I am a fan of this story, though, which is so, so great. And this chapter was one of your best, I'd say ... (though way too short ;))
Can't wait for the next one!

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awww yay hes back i hope she wakes up soon

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Wonderful Story so far. Read it from the beginning until now. Please update soon?

Alonia187.

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And Draco's back.. Wake up, Hermione!!! :)

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Why did it say I'll be home soon, Mia ?? Good story btw !! xx =D

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Awww I hope scorpius is ok and I hope drake comes back soon

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Cliffhanger!!! It just makes me even more excited for the next chapter to come!

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How very Slytherin of you to end on a cliffy. Now I'll just have to bite my nails to the quick until your next update! Please, please, pretty please, update as soon as possible; if not sooner than that. This chapter was really something else; and I'll be looking out for your next one eagerly!

Author's Response: thank you for all those reviews you've given! i really, honestly love them! it's nice having reviews like yours once in a while :)

the next chapter is in the process of validation. hoping it'll come up soon!

thank you so much for reviewing!

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You can write all the odd chapters you feel like if they're this good! Absolutely loved it. You have talent; and I'll be sticking with you to the end! I'm usually too lazy and ungrateful to review; but your story has so gripped me that I just had to.

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I like how the most unlikely people are friends. Somehow you've managed to pull it off! It's amazingly natural, and more importantly, believable! Thank you for not killing Hermione off yet. It's still early days though; but it's your baby; so feel free. I'm a romantic rather than a realist; so I'll keep hoping for a happy ever after. Now for the next chapter.

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It just gets better and better! I am liking this fine tale of yours the more I read. Hope you haven't planned an early demise for Hermione! That poor girl seems to get everything thrown her way. I'm already on the starting block waiting to get off to the next chapter.

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I must confess that I thought yours was the story you referred to; and was slightly peeved that you had taken so long to get back to business. Egg on face time yeah! Any hooh I am enjoying what I've read so far. I'm anxious to get on to the next chapter as it's all good 'til now

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What a mean cliffy!! Honestly, you'll just have to update ever so soon since I am so, so, so curious now!

Author's Response: the next chapter is up on validation! I'm hoping it'll come up soon!

thanks for the review!
x

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This is absolutely amazing!!

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I thought was great and hope that you will continue with the story. I want to hear more of what is going to happen.

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WOW!
I need to read moree!
please keep on writing!
I think I found a new drug, cause I am addicted to this story!

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LOVE ur story :D
UPDATE SOOON!

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amazing job hun you got me all teary eyed amazing job

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this chapter is satisfying and i am glad that narcissa went to her, can't wait to read what happens next.

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this was good. though i have to agree with you about this chapter being odd. It didnt seem to phase my reading, it made sense as far as the story line goes.

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