I won't let you be fed to the Arachnids. A very interesting chapter. I don't understand why it's taking either Ginny or Harry to talk to each other. They are living in the same house. How is it they have avoided each other? I hope it won't take too much longer.
FoMAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review, sorry it took a while to respond.
I believe that Harry's big flaw is failing to not let anyone in, because he wishes for no one he cares about to get dragged into his life, and that would happen especially with all the stuff that I mentioned in the first chapter. I have of course read a number of fanfictions when Harry and Ginny get back together straight away, and that may be how they saw it, but I just didn't. Next couple of chapters will be up ASAP :D Report Review
Very sweet, very Romantic. I'd say Ron either brushed up his reading of "12 ways to Charm Witches", or he is extremely motivated. So why is Harry being retincent? Why hasn't Ginny confronted him? Perhaps in the next. Good story, so far.
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Oh for heaven's sake! Don't do something as drastic as feeding yourself to Aragog's children! Besides, acromantulas have notoriously horrible breath!!! And not even a whole case of tic tacs will help! So here's your review! I am really enjoying the story and like the idea of telling it from different points of view! I am kindof wanting to see your take on how Harry's gets back with the fiery redheaded one! Until the next chapter! And by the way, if you just have to punish yourself to get a review, might I suggest something a bit less intense like a tap on the back of your hand with a ruler?! ;) :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review, now I won't get eaten :D. As I have said, I have a couple of ideas as to how I can develop the Harry/Ginny relationship, it's just thinking about which ideas I can develop even further and enhance the story. Report Review
Very cute update. Clean teeth, Ron! ;)Author's Response: haha thanks, I'll try and get a new chapter up on Friday because I'm not in school. Keep looking out for it :) Report Review
OMG i LOVE this. I really like how you made Hermione and Mrs.Weasley bond. PLEASE POST THE NEXT ONE SOON! Report Review
don't know where to go with this chapter. I know that you are developing you characters. I would have thought that Hermione would have been a little more aggressive. And I know that Ron has the emotional range of a teaspoon, but you think by now it would have a little more capacity (Tablespoon) Report Review
Very cute! Now, who is next for the perspective? I like how you're doing it so far. Report Review
I wonder just who gave Ron the kick he needed to declare himself to Hermione. I'd like to think it was Arthur, at the urging of Molly. I was a bit surprised though that Hermione hasn't said anything about going to get her parents.
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I'd say this is a good start to what is my favorite genre, AtB. I'm always interested in how people see the 19yrs. This story felt very canon, with two exceptions. First Bellatrix is DEAD. She messed with the wrong witch, when she threatened Molly's family. Second, I got the feeling that when the Battle was done Harry had every intention of getting back with Ginny, no matter what Ron thought. Still I like the feel of this one, so I saved it and will continue.
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Ohh it's sooo good!!! I hope you write more really soon!!!Author's Response: i will try to put a new chapter as soon as possible but im going on holiday in a week so itll be on when i get back. Thanks for the review, made my day Report Review
A couple of errors 1) Bellatrix is dead and therefore could not be captured. 2) Fred could not run to his room as he is also dead.
Otherwise not a bad opening chapter, however, I am tired of reading (other stories) about Ron telling Harry what he can and can not do to or with Ginny. It should be just up to Harry and/or Ginny to decide what relationship that want. The only people who could interfere should be Molly and/or Author.
I will continue to read your story to see where you go from here.Author's Response: about the mistakes 1) i meant lestrange as in her husband and 2) i meant george
ill try to put a new chapter up in the next couple of weeks and thanks for reading Report Review
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