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Review #1, by Ron is my hero

27th July 2010:

Hey !
I found the story adorable and just so sweet. I just recommend you be careful with your tenses. You can switch your tenses sometimes so just make sure to watch out for that. But besides that, it's such a gracious and fun story. I loved it :D

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Review #2, by HoneyBabyDarlin

The Power of Cookies

25th July 2010:

Although I found the dramatic turn to be a little unplausible, I did enjoy it overall. Well done.

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Review #3, by Timechild

The Power of Cookies

21st July 2010:

LoL, Fred and George get most of the cookies. Interesting fic. It could use a little more detail. Like more emotion before they talk. For example. When Ron felt terrible, you could add "He felt like he had just _. Just a thought

Nicely written overall

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I'll keep it in mind.

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Review #4, by WhatAboutRegulus

The Power of Cookies

19th July 2010:

Hah aww that was cute. Did this take place when they were still in Hogwarts, maybe not at hogwarts at the moment, but they still had school? This was a really good one-shot!! :)

WhatAboutRegulus

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) Yeah, its probably around 5/6 year... I didn't really pinpoint it when I wrote it but they were definitely still in school.

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