Can you put up the next chapter? Please? Pwease?? XD I'll be looking forward to your next update

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Rosie. Will be working on the next chapter soon! xx

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Amazing! Bloody brilliant. (: more soon, please!

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I will be working on this soon! xxx

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This is really good! Hope you continue posting soon :D

Author's Response: Thank you for all your comments, I will be posting again, and hopefully soon when I get some free time! xx

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Good job! I'm a fan of forbidden romances ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you xx

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This is really good!!! I've always wanted to write my own fred/ george- focused story but never really came up with a brilliant plot!!! Love it!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hope you continue reading! xx

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AW so bittersweet :') i don't know if i want to smile or cry, honestly. KEEP WRITING! :)

Author's Response: Aw thank you, I will be continuing this story soon! Lena xx

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I know that you probably have a lot of things on your mind or you've just got writers block but I really think thatyou should continue writing this story. It really is quite good.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comment. I have been really busy but I will be continuing this story in the very near future! xx

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I love this story. I mean, you've made it so interesting. You get Ron's point of view, which is heartbreaking, as well as Hermione and Fred's.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! xx

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Finally, that's how it's done. I've been looking for such a story for ages, please do continue as soon as you can, because it's been amazingly well-written. Brilliant! :)

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you for your comment. I will be continuing the story very soon. xx

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Damn! I dislike Ron now :/ Very good so far XD Love it :) 30/10 :D

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much!!
- Lena xx

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Brilliant! its the best I have read in a looonng time. Very true to charater and well written.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Im so glad you like it, and hope you continue reading it! xx

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This is a good story so far I really like it

Author's Response: Thanks Amanda, glad you like it!! xx

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Ron shouldhave found them...well maybe not yet, anyway. Can you imagine how he would have reacted. good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews! Yes, I thought it would be too early in the story for any major drama to occur! Currently still writing ch 3, so hope you enjoy that one too! xx

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Good intro chapter. I really like how you have all 3 perspectives and its not like 'BAM...Ron's povBAM!povchange'...good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review skittery, hope you keep reading! xx

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I really like this story, especially the way you've done it from three points of view! Please update soon :) It looks to be very promising!

Author's Response: Thanks very much Sophie, I'm glad you like it!
Will be updating soon, hope you enjoy the next chapter xx

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That was an amazing chapter!
I love this story.
please update soon, i can't wait to read more.


Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am in the middle of writing the next chapter, hope to post soon! xx

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I love the story, but your grammar does need a little work. There's a lot of inconsistencies in the points of view used, along with punctuation. All in all, though, this storyy is excellent. :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for the review!
I know, my grammar is really rubbish, I will polish up this chapter sometime soon!! I'm glad you like the story though! xx

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i love this story there is not one thing bad about this amazing job hun

Author's Response: Aw, what a lovely review, thank you so much! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story, will be adding ch.2 as soon as the queue reopens! xx

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I really enjoyed reading it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it xx

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I love Hermione/FredorGeorge pairing!! :)
I can't wait to see what happen next! :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much dalarifat, hope you enjoy the story! xx

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really good but why is fred alive ?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
As you can see from the genre labels I've given this story, it's an Alternate Universe. I know I could have used George but I need both twins for this story. xx

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this sounds pretty good for the first chapter.
but a pet peeve i have is when people nickname characters who don't have a nickname..so, here's some constructive criticism if you will,
don't call hermione "mia" or "mione" or something like that..
other than that, awesome!

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for your review!

Ahh, I never thought of it that way. To be honest, the real reason why she has a nickname is purely cos its a drag having to type out her name all the time. lol.

However, I do actually agree with you here, and I will take your advice. I have already written ch.2 with the name "Mia" flying all around the place, so the chapters after that will contain less Mias as I will consciously make an effort not to do so!

Thanks for the review, hope you enjoy the next chapter!! xx

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