Very sweet. I can see them going further than the books showed while still at Hogwarts.Author's Response: Thank you. I agree. JKR didn't really go into any detail about their relationship so this was my. way. I don't know, I wrote this a long time ago and no longer think this a good story but your kind comments are really appreciated. :) Report Review
While your idea was cute, original and snappy, I was distracted by the missing words and punctuation mistakes. You should probably get a beta reader in order to eliminate those annoying errors so your humour and wit can shine through :)Author's Response: Can we just classify this story as my first ever and then excuse its terribleness? I hav fixed it up a lot since it was first posted but I never wanted to re-write it because its a good reminder of how much I've improved. But thank you about my humour and wit. I do like parts of the story but its still not that great. but thanks about the review! It's always nice to get more opinions. :) Report Review
Haha, I loved this one! As I've said before, your Madame Mystery thing is such a good idea! I really enjoyed reading this one! You exceeded my expectations.. but I'm giving you an O for Outstanding ;)
I thought the scenes were great, but you could've developed the relationship between Harry and Ginny a little more. One second Harry kisses her impulsively, and the next, they're in the Room of Requirement doing.. yeah haha. This is relatively short compared to your other stories as well. It was very sweet though. The Madame Mystery commentary made it different from other Harry/Ginny stories.
Nice writing. Nice characters! The trio is kinda hard to write sometimes, but you did a great job! An enjoyable read :)Author's Response: Hi Charlotte! Thanks, this is probably the oldest story on here but I did go back and edit out all the bad stuff a while ago so I'm glad that it's a bit better now. I guess I kind of lost inspiration to develop this more and make it splendid and long but I'm happy with it enough.
So thank you for coming on over. :) Report Review
Love Ron's expression after watching Harry and Ginny. Can never get enough of Ron being an older brother. Great job!Author's Response: Thank you! I love Ron too! :)
Thanks for the review. Report Review
I thought it was a really good plot bunny and that you conveyed your story well, I especially liked the parts where Mme Mystery gave a running commentary, I found these very funny. However that said I do think there are some areas you could improve i.e. when Harry said "LOL jokes, Cho was", I thought it seemed very OOC (out of character) also the part with the book signings and the shampoo advertisements didn't quite seem to fit with the tone throughout the rest of the play. The mention of book signings e.t.c is more something that would be found in a parody or AU story. Nonetheless I found the story very entertaining.Author's Response: Yeah, call it a bit of an experiment story and the things you picked up on i realised was just not working. I think i might rewrite it. But I do love the plot of Madame Mystery so i appreciate the review and the input. Thanks. :) Report Review
Could of done with a bit more detail and more plot really. But I liked your idea and saw possibilities in your idea. :)Author's Response: Yeah, i know i could have made it so much longer and detailed but it was my first go and it was good practise I guess. Thanks you for the review. :) Report Review
That was AWESOME! Can u write another one?
11/10 (If I could)Author's Response: I did :) It is Madame Mystery: Beautiful Lover. Following Draco and his future wife. Thanks for the awesome review. Report Review
LOL! great story, i loved your little breaks in the middle, it was actually quite funny to have a random pause like that :P although i wish you could have made it longer, it seemed too end sooner than it should've. it's just my opinion but maybe you could have talked a bit more about how they would get back together, and then them having their kids..? but your the author so who am i to tell you what to do? :P again, great story, while it lasted!Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah i enjoyed those random kind of narrator things and i was always iffy about the length but I kind of just ran out of things to say, but i'm a better writer now so i guess it was good practise! Thanks for the amazing review. Report Review
OMG OMG I like this so much! Madame Mystery is damn awesome! If you have a mailing list, can you please put me into one? I'd love to hear from you. And a request, I would like to know some of Draco Malfoy's love story! (Of course he is so hot that no one can resist him, even me :p) So yeah, great job, and I would like to see some more of Madame Mystery! :)Author's Response: Thankyou for reading! I'm glad you liked it! Not sure about the mailing list yet but I'll get there :) Report Review
HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA OMG I AM PRAISING WHOEVER EDITED THIS!
oh wait that was me.
hahah awesomeee :PAuthor's Response: hey emma! glad you like it!
and thankyou SOO MUCH for the banner! :D
I LOVE YOU! your the most awesomest best friend EVER
YOU ARE MY JESUS! :D
everyone; emma is cool. read her stories :D Report Review
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