This was very sweet and very well written! It was nice to read something that showed how wonderful a dad James was. Great work!Author's Response: Great review! Thank Christ that someone wanted to read about a good James. Thanks a lot. Report Review
i love it. :) i like how it was from James point of view. and agreed. he tired to keep his wife and sonAuthor's Response: Thanks for reviewing, reviewer with the loong name.
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i think this is really good. i mean im annoyed at ho most people wont write about james and harry. yes-lily was brave but people do always forget that james died too. tis makes me sad :( ... but anywayss/.. i like how u wrote james dream. it shows the emotions that- if james was real- how he would feel about his girl and his baby.Author's Response: Thanks... I thjink it is one of my best. Am extremely glad you agree Report Review
grt stry! does show a rather underrated side of james. kep writing dear it is goodAuthor's Response: Thank you so very much for finding the time and inclination to R&R! Report Review
Awww this was so cute! I love it, and I totally agree that people forget about James dying for Harry. This was really sweet, 10/10Author's Response: Thank you so very much for finding the time and inclination to R&R! Report Review
Awh! That was so sweet! I could see it all playing out in my head, and I think the way you wrote it was perfect - no needless descriptions or long chunks of text, just good-sized paragraphs with just the right amount of words.
I agree with you that James sacrificed himself for his wife and child, and I think the way you wrote him in this one shot was just perfect. The worry and the love he feels for Harry was so sweet, and considering what happens later... :'(
Thanks for writing such a great little story! ^^Author's Response: Thank you so very much for finding the time and inclination to R&R! Report Review
I like it and I agree with you opinion that James wasn´t just arrogant prick like people often say.Author's Response: Thank you so very much for finding the time and inclination to R&R!
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