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Review #1, by PhoenixTailAndHolly Chapter 2...The Burrow

20th June 2013:
Cool! I hope you update soon. Leave me a review if you feel like it!

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Review #2, by Canadianginny Chapter 2...The Burrow

9th January 2011:
I absolutely love your story! It has so many of those little moments that if JKR would have included in her original version, the H/R love story would have been a better explained. Not to discredit her work though.
:D

Author's Response: wow! i didnt know people would like this story that much! thank you so much!
i will try to update soon


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Review #3, by Harry and Ginny Prologue

8th July 2010:
this seems very interesting. will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: yay!! this is my first review...thank you so much!!!
yes, I will update soon.I am going on vacation tomorrow, and maybe I will get some detailed ideas...thank you!
hpfan0912


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Review #4, by Dalek194 Prologue

8th July 2010:
A very sweet start :-) You write Ron and Hermione very well; they are so cute together! Well done, I really enjoy your writing style.

A small note; why is this chapter called epilogue? That's what you call something set at the end; you might mean a prologue, which is set at the beginning :-) Also, I think you need a warning for language, as Hermione uses some once. All the same, you have done very well, and I look forward to the next chapter. Please update soon!

Author's Response: omigod...I just realized that!! Thank you, this will be changed.
and where does Hermione use language? I will look into it, though, Thank you!
I will try to update very soon!!


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