NO NO IM NOT!! IM NOT GETTING TIRED OF ALIX AND TYLER (although I know you already finished this novel lol)Author's Response: Lol, thanks! Report Review
YAAAYAYAYAY! Also, PRACTICALLY taken straight out of Another Cinderella Story!Author's Response: I'm pretty sure I said that in the A/N. :) Report Review
GODDAMMIT IVE BEEN HOLDING BACK FOR THIS LONG BUT WE NEED TO GET HER BACK WITH TYLER!! THE BOY IS PROBABLY DYING FROM THE HURT HE'S IN WITHOUT HER!Author's Response: :) Thanks for r & r Report Review
Loving the story! The idea of it really grabbed my attention, and I'm working my way through the first 10 chapters right now! Just a note: since words like for and between are prepositions, saying for I and between you and I is actually incorrect. It should be for me and between you and me. I noticed it was consistent, so just figured I'd point it out :)Author's Response: Oh, alright, thanks!! :) And jsyk, this is a sequel. The first one is Mother May I :) Report Review
I knew it was coming and I still hate it.
And I love Demi Lovato's song.
And I'm on to chapter 12!Author's Response: Lol thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
I love that song, Daughter to Father.
And I'm liking this so far! On to three!Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
AH write the sequal soon?! Please?! I have read both storys straight! I hate that its over D: xxAuthor's Response: There's another sequel called Baby Boom up already. It's 36 chapters in. Report Review
They're funny and sad and heartbreaking and just amazing! Can't wait to read the nxt one!Author's Response: Awe, I love you! :P Thanks so much for such a kind review!! You made my day :) Report Review
Hello, I really like your story as I liked MOther May I? I was just wondering how old Snape was? Because in the books he'd be like twice Hermione's age or more? BUt if you had changed his age to suit the fan fiction that would be cool, I was just wondering :) Also i thought Hermione was going to Hogwarts to be the new potions teacher but then Snape said he was, I'm a little confused but maybe I read it wrong? If you could clear that for me that would be awesome.
Anyways great work, I really hope you continue writing because you are a fantastic writer :)Author's Response: I probably did make the mistake of Snape's position. She's supposed to be Potions & he's supposed to be dada. thanks for telling me, Ill clear it up. I like to think Snape is about 10 years older than Hermione, in my fic. lol. :) Thank for reading and reviewing! Report Review
please tell us what the name of the sequal to this story is!!! if care for us at all please tell us! :)Author's Response: It goes from Mother May I to Daddy Dearest to Baby Boom. Report Review
You took the dancing scene from 'Another Cinderella Story', didn't you? And the dress, and the masquerade ball? It took me a minute to figure out why it felt so familiar!Author's Response: Yeah, I borrowed the dress and mask. Made it easier for the soon-to-come graphics. As for the dance scene, yeah I definaltely did. I meant to put that as a A/N at the end but Im not sure if I did or not. Report Review
You seem to love Taylor Swift as much as me, so virtual high five! Actually, unless you know the lyrics to more than 15 of her songs, at least the chorus to most of the rest and are able to name about 90% of all the songs she's ever written, you don't love her as much as me! What can I say, I'm obsessed.
Anyway, I LOVE the story, keep on writing!Author's Response: Lol, I know all of her songs. I went to a concert last year in march. it was amazing! :) Thanks! Report Review
I LOVE THAT SONG ! You are officially awesome for putting it up. I listened to it while reading this and had this huge dorky smile on my face the entire time, that's how much I love this song.
Your story is REALLY ggod, I love it too! I've been sucked into it (and it's prequel) for the past 2 days.Author's Response: Well thank you! Im glad I have such a faithful reviewer! :) Report Review
ya...i think hermione should'e ended up with Draco but that's only because i am a major Dramione fan so ya.Author's Response: i am too, but ive had this story written for awhile and its always been severus/hermione. lol. thanks for reading and reviewing. Report Review
I have read both of your stories, and all I can say is that you're an amazing writer... As for story names, a few things I can think off the top of my head are 'Baby Boom', or maybe even something along the lines of 'Babytalk'. Of course, these are only suggestions that I randomly thought up, and excuse the lameness of them, for it 11:30 at night :-PAuthor's Response: Not even kidding, Baby Boom was what I decided to name it :P Thanks for the suggestions and Im so glad youve liked my stories! The new one should be up soon! Thanks again! Report Review
Hey just want to say i have follwed both of your stories and they are fantastic!!!
Please could you post your new story soon i really really want to read it. If your stuck for title think of the title you have already created, you have had a mum and dad orientated titles, so if the third part of story is about the pregnancies you could use something that both Hermionie and Alix shout at Tyler and Severus like 'Seperate beds!' or 'It hurt's!'
Or you could go at it from a different angle like Alix or Hermionie giving their child like a command like 'Son, don't talk with your mouth full' or 'Princess, stop shoving lego up your nose!' something funny and silly :)
I hope my suggestions help if they don't i bet your title shall be even better, i just hope you will post the third part soon!
10/10 (You're a great writer!)Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a nice review! I kind of am stuck for a title a bit. Yours are very clever! Unfortunately, Im kinda lookin for a phrase with the word baby in it. Like how I did Mother May I, and Daddy Dearest. Theyre cliches, phrases. :) Great ideas though!!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :D Report Review
May I just say that I have devoured these stories over the past few days, having found "Daddy Dearest" a couple of chapters ago, and I would like to thank you for sharing your work with the wider public. I've been enjoying the story, and while I have had a *couple* of nitpicks, I count it time well spent. :)
I don't have an account on the forums, but I would still like to recommend the name "Bouncing Babies" for the sequel.
Cheers!Author's Response: Aww, youre so sweet! Thanks so much for reading and this fabulous reviews. To be honest, Id rather people review with their ideas but hpff wont let me say so in the story. its against their rules. :)
Cute title. I shall add it to the list!! Thanks for reading, reviewing and giving your idea :D Report Review
Enjoyed it all the way through, looking forward to the next one!Author's Response: Thanks bunches! Report Review
Such a great chapter! I can't wait for the next installment in the series!!! As for the name maybe My Baby You'll Always Be, or Sweet Child of Mine.Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing and thanks for the title ideas :) Report Review
Ah, I remember noticing that they didn't do the spell at the night of the spell. And this happens.
The sequel will be so intense, drama-filled. I can't wait til it gets put up. As for the title, I'm afraid I can't think of anything, but since the stories so far have been 'Mother, May I?' and 'Daddy Dearest', I think it should be a trend of some sort. ;)
Awesome story and I can't wait until the sequel!
haPpy dazeAuthor's Response: Yeah, I'd love to follow trend but I just cant think of anything. Kudos for being the first (and only) to notice the spell's absence. Thanks so much for reading & reviewing! Report Review
Seriously love the story, the plot line is amazing. Now as constructive critisism goes, you should know the alix pregnancy was a little obvious. Besides that I can't think of any thing to add ... Wait!!! I thought of something, hurry up and write more I hate waiting!!! ThanksAuthor's Response: Lol, a new chapter is in validation. Thanks so much for the criticism and compliments! :) I'd love to hear your ideas on how to make her pregnancy better written. I'd love to be a better writer! :)
If you'd like to give me pointers, or just point out the obviousness, please feel free to email me at codicrogers @ aol . com (take out the spaces)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
o my goodness, they're both pregnant!! What a cliffy! Great chapter post again soon! :)Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! Ill post a chapter asap! Report Review
OH a new twist.this should be interesting.Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Great, love the story, the characters are sooo idk what word to use... Amazing I guess, Please hurry with th next chapter!!!Author's Response: Thanks bunches! The next chapter is in validation! Report Review
did Tyler keep on his bracelet even though they broke upAuthor's Response: Yes. :) Good question! Report Review
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