Reading Reviews for Daddy Dearest
  
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Review #1, by Hannah Disbelief

19th January 2013:
NO NO IM NOT!! IM NOT GETTING TIRED OF ALIX AND TYLER (although I know you already finished this novel lol)

Author's Response: Lol, thanks!

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Review #2, by Hannah Passion

19th January 2013:
YAAAYAYAYAY! Also, PRACTICALLY taken straight out of Another Cinderella Story!

Author's Response: I'm pretty sure I said that in the A/N. :)

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Review #3, by Hannah Guilt

19th January 2013:
GODDAMMIT IVE BEEN HOLDING BACK FOR THIS LONG BUT WE NEED TO GET HER BACK WITH TYLER!! THE BOY IS PROBABLY DYING FROM THE HURT HE'S IN WITHOUT HER!

Author's Response: :) Thanks for r & r

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Review #4, by hot_stuff11 Desire

28th August 2012:
Loving the story! The idea of it really grabbed my attention, and I'm working my way through the first 10 chapters right now! Just a note: since words like for and between are prepositions, saying for I and between you and I is actually incorrect. It should be for me and between you and me. I noticed it was consistent, so just figured I'd point it out :)

Author's Response: Oh, alright, thanks!! :) And jsyk, this is a sequel. The first one is Mother May I :)

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Review #5, by Luckygurl102 Betrayal

28th July 2012:
I knew it was coming and I still hate it.
And I love Demi Lovato's song.
And I'm on to chapter 12!

Author's Response: Lol thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #6, by Luckygurl102 Meeting

28th July 2012:
I love that song, Daughter to Father.
And I'm liking this so far! On to three!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #7, by MoonlightFaerae Blame

28th July 2012:
AH write the sequal soon?! Please?! I have read both storys straight! I hate that its over D: xx

Author's Response: There's another sequel called Baby Boom up already. It's 36 chapters in.

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Review #8, by JAydecolorsLife Blame

10th August 2011:
Your.story's.are.AMAZING!
They're funny and sad and heartbreaking and just amazing! Can't wait to read the nxt one!

Author's Response: Awe, I love you! :P Thanks so much for such a kind review!! You made my day :)

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Review #9, by ILoveRonWeasley55 Homecoming

1st August 2011:
Hello, I really like your story as I liked MOther May I? I was just wondering how old Snape was? Because in the books he'd be like twice Hermione's age or more? BUt if you had changed his age to suit the fan fiction that would be cool, I was just wondering :) Also i thought Hermione was going to Hogwarts to be the new potions teacher but then Snape said he was, I'm a little confused but maybe I read it wrong? If you could clear that for me that would be awesome.
Anyways great work, I really hope you continue writing because you are a fantastic writer :)

Author's Response: I probably did make the mistake of Snape's position. She's supposed to be Potions & he's supposed to be dada. thanks for telling me, Ill clear it up. I like to think Snape is about 10 years older than Hermione, in my fic. lol. :) Thank for reading and reviewing!

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Review #10, by james girl Blame

18th July 2011:
please tell us what the name of the sequal to this story is!!! if care for us at all please tell us! :)

Author's Response: It goes from Mother May I to Daddy Dearest to Baby Boom.

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Review #11, by Me Passion

26th June 2011:
You took the dancing scene from 'Another Cinderella Story', didn't you? And the dress, and the masquerade ball? It took me a minute to figure out why it felt so familiar!

Author's Response: Yeah, I borrowed the dress and mask. Made it easier for the soon-to-come graphics. As for the dance scene, yeah I definaltely did. I meant to put that as a A/N at the end but Im not sure if I did or not.

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Review #12, by Me Transformation

26th June 2011:
You seem to love Taylor Swift as much as me, so virtual high five! Actually, unless you know the lyrics to more than 15 of her songs, at least the chorus to most of the rest and are able to name about 90% of all the songs she's ever written, you don't love her as much as me! What can I say, I'm obsessed.
Anyway, I LOVE the story, keep on writing!

Author's Response: Lol, I know all of her songs. I went to a concert last year in march. it was amazing! :) Thanks!

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Review #13, by Me Trouble

26th June 2011:
I LOVE THAT SONG ! You are officially awesome for putting it up. I listened to it while reading this and had this huge dorky smile on my face the entire time, that's how much I love this song.
Your story is REALLY ggod, I love it too! I've been sucked into it (and it's prequel) for the past 2 days.

Author's Response: Well thank you! Im glad I have such a faithful reviewer! :)

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Review #14, by syndariwoody Blame

20th June 2011:
ya...i think hermione should'e ended up with Draco but that's only because i am a major Dramione fan so ya.

Author's Response: i am too, but ive had this story written for awhile and its always been severus/hermione. lol. thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Review #15, by Brittany Blame

8th June 2011:
I have read both of your stories, and all I can say is that you're an amazing writer... As for story names, a few things I can think off the top of my head are 'Baby Boom', or maybe even something along the lines of 'Babytalk'. Of course, these are only suggestions that I randomly thought up, and excuse the lameness of them, for it 11:30 at night :-P

Author's Response: Not even kidding, Baby Boom was what I decided to name it :P Thanks for the suggestions and Im so glad youve liked my stories! The new one should be up soon! Thanks again!

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Review #16, by Lallen Blame

2nd June 2011:
Hey just want to say i have follwed both of your stories and they are fantastic!!!

Please could you post your new story soon i really really want to read it. If your stuck for title think of the title you have already created, you have had a mum and dad orientated titles, so if the third part of story is about the pregnancies you could use something that both Hermionie and Alix shout at Tyler and Severus like 'Seperate beds!' or 'It hurt's!'

Or you could go at it from a different angle like Alix or Hermionie giving their child like a command like 'Son, don't talk with your mouth full' or 'Princess, stop shoving lego up your nose!' something funny and silly :)

I hope my suggestions help if they don't i bet your title shall be even better, i just hope you will post the third part soon!

10/10 (You're a great writer!)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a nice review! I kind of am stuck for a title a bit. Yours are very clever! Unfortunately, Im kinda lookin for a phrase with the word baby in it. Like how I did Mother May I, and Daddy Dearest. Theyre cliches, phrases. :) Great ideas though!!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :D


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Review #17, by DawnRain Blame

31st May 2011:
Hi!

May I just say that I have devoured these stories over the past few days, having found "Daddy Dearest" a couple of chapters ago, and I would like to thank you for sharing your work with the wider public. I've been enjoying the story, and while I have had a *couple* of nitpicks, I count it time well spent. :)

I don't have an account on the forums, but I would still like to recommend the name "Bouncing Babies" for the sequel.

Cheers!

Author's Response: Aww, youre so sweet! Thanks so much for reading and this fabulous reviews. To be honest, Id rather people review with their ideas but hpff wont let me say so in the story. its against their rules. :)

Cute title. I shall add it to the list!! Thanks for reading, reviewing and giving your idea :D


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Review #18, by Victoria LH Blame

30th May 2011:
Enjoyed it all the way through, looking forward to the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks bunches!

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Review #19, by Gryffindor_Princess8 Blame

30th May 2011:
Such a great chapter! I can't wait for the next installment in the series!!! As for the name maybe My Baby You'll Always Be, or Sweet Child of Mine.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing and thanks for the title ideas :)

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Review #20, by stepnhunguyen Blame

29th May 2011:
Ah, I remember noticing that they didn't do the spell at the night of the spell. And this happens.

The sequel will be so intense, drama-filled. I can't wait til it gets put up. As for the title, I'm afraid I can't think of anything, but since the stories so far have been 'Mother, May I?' and 'Daddy Dearest', I think it should be a trend of some sort. ;)

Awesome story and I can't wait until the sequel!

10/10

haPpy daze

Author's Response: Yeah, I'd love to follow trend but I just cant think of anything. Kudos for being the first (and only) to notice the spell's absence. Thanks so much for reading & reviewing!

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Review #21, by PrincessLionHeart Surprise

23rd May 2011:
Seriously love the story, the plot line is amazing. Now as constructive critisism goes, you should know the alix pregnancy was a little obvious. Besides that I can't think of any thing to add ... Wait!!! I thought of something, hurry up and write more I hate waiting!!! Thanks

Author's Response: Lol, a new chapter is in validation. Thanks so much for the criticism and compliments! :) I'd love to hear your ideas on how to make her pregnancy better written. I'd love to be a better writer! :)

If you'd like to give me pointers, or just point out the obviousness, please feel free to email me at codicrogers @ aol . com (take out the spaces)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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Review #22, by Gryffindor_Princess8 Surprise

20th May 2011:
o my goodness, they're both pregnant!! What a cliffy! Great chapter post again soon! :)

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! Ill post a chapter asap!

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Review #23, by Victoria LH Surprise

20th May 2011:
OH a new twist.this should be interesting.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #24, by PrincessLionHeart Disbelief

7th May 2011:
Great, love the story, the characters are sooo idk what word to use... Amazing I guess, Please hurry with th next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks bunches! The next chapter is in validation!

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Review #25, by MrsMalfoy98 Hormones

22nd April 2011:
did Tyler keep on his bracelet even though they broke up

Author's Response: Yes. :) Good question!

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