Reading Reviews for The Stowaway
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by maskedmuggle All Aboard

8th January 2011:
Loved it! Such a cute story!
The ending was great! I didn't expect that!

You got me curious about Victoire's house.. would you have put her in Gryffindor?

Lovely writing as always :)

Author's Response: Hm, I'm really not sure where I would put Victoire. Probably a Gryffindor though. ;)

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Review #2, by jessajay92 All Aboard

29th November 2010:
Aw... this is absolutely adorable! Love it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :)

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Review #3, by SeverusLove All Aboard

16th September 2010:

I really liked the story it was so cute and light-hearted. I love it when a story is more of conversation and less of descriptive detail. Nice going! ^^

Oh, here's a few typos you missed:

ďCome one, letís get inside. --did you really mean "Come one" or "Come on"/"Come little one"?

Victoire nodded, and stayed where her father had told her to, talking in all that was around her. --I think talking in should be taking in.

And that's about it! ^^

xoxo SeverusLove

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll fix the typos up, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

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Review #4, by sarah All Aboard

19th August 2010:
that was really good
and cute
it was hilarious as well
i started cracking up when they found dominique on the train

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

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Review #5, by megan2u All Aboard

30th July 2010:
Wow. Just wow. I loved the direction you took with this story and how you stayed so true to all the characters (and making them your own). I was thinking about entering this challenge as well, but I don't think I can beat you! :)
Loved that Dominique was a stowaway! Great job!

Author's Response: I still think you should enter the challenge. Who knows, you might even beat me! :)

Anyways, thanks for the aweosme review!

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Review #6, by ekroman All Aboard

30th July 2010:
This is so cute ! :) Teddy's last year would be Dom's first :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)

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