It's very dark and gloomy but you feel sorry for her and carry on reading:-)
~Only thing I have to say is that perhaps you should check over before you upload;-)
WELL DONE:dAuthor's Response: check over, in what way? (English is not my native language, so if grammar or spelling isn't quite right, this might explain it.. )
And yeah, I know it's a bit dark and gloomy, but it'll get better.. ;)
Thanks.. Glad you like it.. It's only my 2nd story so far, and I haven't even finished the 1st one yet.. both of my stories are Work In Progress.. :P
That is a good story but i think u need more detail in it as that seemed vry short! otherwise i cant wait for the nxt chapter!! :DAuthor's Response: What kind of details?
Glad you like it so far.
Adding next chapter right now..
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