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Review #1, by BBHP In The Art Of Rejection

6th March 2018:
I am actually squealing in excitement. Canít wait to read her reaction to the kiss.

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Review #2, by HarryGinnyLove88 In The Art of Disclosure

30th January 2018:
Hope you finish this story...

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Review #3, by HarryGinnyLove88 In The Art Of Returning

30th January 2018:
Really. You just have to bring Elliot to james and charlie never get together ...blah just get themtogether please

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Review #4, by Khloe Part I: Prologue: In The Art Of Troublemaking

8th February 2017:
I love the story. You are an amazing writer, where did you get the banner from? It looks awesome, what does tda stand for but amazing story

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Review #5, by Celeste In The Art of Disclosure

26th March 2015:
I just found this story and read it all in one night. It's almost 4 am and I should probably go to sleep. But I had to leave a review.

At this stage I don't know if Charlie and James will ever get together cause they are both mega idiots. But maybe they will sort it out.

I really hope your still going to update this because I am really enjoying this story. It's amazing and has such an awesome original plot that I havnt seen in quite some time usally it's just the same 'blah blah blah I hate you Opps we had sex now I'm pregnant to James potter then boom all of a sudden we are in a relationship and in love' story and Christ am I over those sort of stories.

Please please say your still working on this story. Cause I need to know what happens.

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Review #6, by Aidan Selby In The Art of Disclosure

29th October 2014:
This is officially the BEST fan fiction I have ever read. Please hurry to make the next chapter, PLEASE.

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Review #7, by Lobelia Sackville-Baggins In The Art of Disclosure

4th May 2014:
No! So close! So close!
Darling, I love you to bits. In fact, if I were talking to you in person, I would probably be down on my knees, begging for an update to this masterpiece of a story. You characters are wonderful, and so are you!
Lots of love!
P.S. Yes, I am using a Lord of the Rings pseudonym on a Harry Potter website. Sowwy!

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Review #8, by mildlynaive In The Art of Disclosure

26th April 2014:
this is my most favourite story on the whole website! please continue writing it soon and please James and charlie need to happen like my otp is right here in this story.

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Review #9, by aroundabouts In The Art of Disclosure

4th April 2014:
I love your story so much. It's so addicting to read. Please keep updating. I'm sure others want to continue the story as well. You get people totally immersed in the story. It would be amazing if you kept updating.

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Review #10, by Ali In The Art of Disclosure

3rd January 2014:
Umm...Update?!?!?! Come on!

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Review #11, by Crescent Moon  In The Art of Disclosure

1st November 2013:
I loved this chapter.
I really can't wait to see what's going to happen next.

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Review #12, by bookworm_hermione In The Art Of Returning

3rd October 2013:
"This wasn't for them. This was for me."
Best part of the whole story. BEST.
I'm, sorry, I'm not as eloquent to put that in better words, but That sentence, man. Just asdfjhdfhahj it made me smile so much. Especially because of the last chapter, and how James (douche (ok, not really I still love him)) started spouting that crap about Charlie doing it to get him jealous, and it was like NO. I'm so glad she realized it wasn't for him or anyone else, and that it was for HER. :) Still smiling about it.

And then Owen, I am so glad he said those words about, Charlie and James thinking they're "the he stars of the show, and everyone else are just background characters, there to fill out your life and make it more interesting. We're there to kiss you when you get jealous, and make you laugh when you get bored. We don't matter. Not really." Just. Owen. I'm just sooo glad you said that to help her get her stuff together, and fawking realize how a bit overly dramatic she was being about things (she is. kinda. At least the way I see it. Both her and James are making these stupid mistakes, and denying their feelings and stuff, even though I know that just adds to the story and I love it.)

Then James. Just James man.

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Review #13, by Crazy101 In The Art of Disclosure

3rd October 2013:

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Review #14, by Owlpost68 In The Art of Disclosure

30th September 2013:
Hi, so, generally, I really liked it, I thought it was cute. The one thing is, and can make it a little complicated, boys aren't allowed up to the girls dorms. The stairs turn into a slide. This doesn't mean that with some quick editing the scenes wouldn't work in the common room, that'd be fine.
I'm glad that Elliot at least knows she likes James so he won't get hurt, and I can't wait to see what happens when Charlie and James do get together, can't wait!

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Review #15, by Hedwig_Pie In The Art of Disclosure

30th September 2013:
so i've just been reading this story maniaclly for the past couple of hours and i was just going to press the 'continue to next chapter button' BUT THERE ISN'T ONE. OMG. YOU NEED TO UPDATE. MY LIFE MAY POSSIBLY DEPEND ON IT.
oh yes, because that is in no way sad at all:)
BUT SERIOUSLY YOU'VE GOT TO UPDATE. charlie has matured so much :') and you've just got to update coz this story is amazing!

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Review #16, by Hedwig_Pie In The Art Of Returning

30th September 2013:

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Review #17, by Hedwig_Pie In The Art Of Self Pity

30th September 2013:
charlie is actually amazing.
thank god james came to his senses.

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Review #18, by Hedwig_Pie In The Art Of Change

30th September 2013:

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Review #19, by Hogwarts.Is.My.Home. In The Art of Disclosure

28th September 2013:
I was looking for a new story to read and then i saw that this one had been updated.. It was a good chapter and please update soon!!i love your characters, especially Elliot and Charlie :)
'Kay bye.

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Review #20, by AlexFan In The Art of Disclosure

27th September 2013:
But, but no, it wasn't supposed to happen like this. Why, why couldn't it go right! The one time that James admits his feelings and he has to be drunk when he does it! Honestly, that boy is just asking for it.

I feel so bad for Charlie though because she must feel horrible now, especially after that apology from James! I realise that he doesn't know what he did but still, that has got to hurt. You could tell that Charlie was hoping that he'd remembered everything that had happened the night before.

And I'm excited to see what happens in the next five chapters of the story and how it ends!

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Review #21, by Reese.L.R In The Art of Disclosure

27th September 2013:
Please update more!!
I love your story!!
James is a jerk. I feel so sorry for Charlie!

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Review #22, by ritz97 In The Art Of Returning

9th September 2013:
Ok, let me just start by saying I love love this story. I just can't get enough :D
Now. You cannot take away Max. It's a crime. Please Please get her back.
Elliot? Now that is something i definitely didn't expect :p nice twist :p
And lastly James and Charlie? How much more drama and misunderstandings? I cant take it no more :(
Also, would you do something about the whole Zach/Dan thing? I feel bad for them :P
Lovely story. Keep updating :D

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Review #23, by Hogwarts.Is.My.Home. In The Art Of Returning

19th August 2013:
Wow, this story is amazing! I read the whole thing in one evening.. Can you please update soon because I really need to know what happens next. You're a brilliant writer :)

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Review #24, by taps_017 In The Art Of Returning

14th August 2013:
I love this story - cant wait for the next chapter! :)

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Review #25, by maya In The Art Of Secrets

4th August 2013:
WAIT WAIT WAIT did something happen between Dan and Fred?

excellent story!

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