wow tht was a great start! glad you are continuing =) i rele like the characterization of August

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad I'm continuing as well! :} And yes, August is going to be a rather interesting character, hehe.

x Aoife

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This is an amazing begining to a story.. I jsut wish I knew why he got there I guess... Cant wait for more! your writing and theme reminds me of my friend... a lagit ginger I call Zebley..
Well thats all for now...
xoxoxoxox,
sl

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Oh, Zebley, what a cool name! I hope to jump start on this story again soon!

x Aoife

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This is certainly a dramatic beginning! I like this, and can't wait to see where it goes :) (loving the name, 'Don't ingure the ginger' btw!) x

Author's Response: Thank you, darling! I hope you stick around for more! There will be plenty more drama in store! ;)

And thank you! Hahaha, the name seems to attract people like flies. XD

x Aoife

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I am seriously impressed! That was wicked! I loved your writing and it was very original. It had a nice feel and it flowed well. And just fyi I adore your pen name :) good job!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much for this lovely review! I'm very, very glad that you liked it and I hope that you stick along for more!

And yes, my pen name does tend to strike up conversations. All I have to say on the subject is: I was probably drunk.

Ahaha, I kid, I kid. Kind of. xD

x Aoife

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Hey,

I think you've made a good start here; first the introduction of your antagonist - a Gaunt no less, then a murder? Hmm, curiouser and curiouser.

I also liked your use of description of Robbie's thoughts; the panic, fear and desperation. What I like most is that you have my mind asking all sorts of questions (don't worry, they're good questions =]). For example: what mission? what happened to him? etc. In essence my dear, you've caught my interest. I love fics like this!

Good luck in continuing this!
Lia

Author's Response: Oh wow! I was definitely not expecting this when I woke up this morning! Firstly, thank you, thank you, thank you for giving me such a nice first review. :D

I'm really glad that you liked my description because I thought it was always one of my weaker points in writing. Hopefully, I can flesh it out a bit more with this story!

Thank for this lovely morning gift and an equally lovely review.

x Aoife

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