Oh my. This is very dark. I hated it... Oh no, not the story. And definitely not your writing. As usual, your writing is perfect. But how evil Bellatrix is. It fit JK's portrayal of the evil witch.
I mean, what happen to her to make her so evil? Was it her love for Voldemolt? Or her hatred of everything muggle? Or did a bully pull the head off of her favorite pet turtle back in grade school? Must have been a muggle bully, huh?
Great job. I am not surprised anymore with your ability to write about any character(s). You obviously do your 'homework' before taking them on.
Keep it up!
Oh... you're the best! :-)Author's Response: Oh. Ouch. Burn. (To Bellatrix. Although I will admit that this hurt me at first!)
I've always wondered what happened to make her so awful... I can't come up with anything. It must have been a serious of tormenting events combined with a terrible childhood.
Oh my god, plot bunny.
Well, I was actually surprised that I could write her, but I think my favorite characterization is Colin Creevy in Shutter, a story that can only be found on my account on fanfiction(net). Seeing as he's such a shadowy character, having my own take on him was amazing. But, again, the story is very sad. ~writergirl8 Report Review
Amazing. Completely Amazing.Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! That's really sweet :D ~writergirl8 Report Review
Very, very excellent. Exactly as I imagined Bellatrix to think like . . . . well done!Author's Response: Oooh, yay! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this. I hope I captured the evil that is Bellatrix properly. ~writergirl8 Report Review
Ooooh so intriguing! I really liked this (but I may be a little biased because I'm mildly obsessed with Bellatrix...). Your descriptions were fantastic--I love the way you wrote out the whole intro; that's definitely what goes on in Bellatrix's crazy, mad, lunatic, psychopath mind. You brought us into her thoughts extremely well. Great job! And thanks so much for participating in my challenge!!Author's Response: Thanks for this review :) It's the first one I gotten... guess I didn't do all that well because no one seems to want to comment. Anyway, Bellatrix obsessions? Never heard of that one! You must be truly unique! Glad you think I brought you into her mind very well. I was worried about this, because I'm not used to writing evil people. This challenge was definitely a challenge for me, but I had so much fun with it! ~writergirl8 Report Review
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