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Review #1, by Raina Moon Same time in the same spot

1st December 2010:
Cute story! I really love that song. (Reba and Kenny are amazing together!) Anyway, I loved the concept of this story, but I think it could use a little more detail to make it pop. The dialoge is good, but also incorporate more about how the characters are feeling. I know you touch lightly on the character's emotions, but try going more in depth with that.
Sorry, the inner critique came out for a second there. I really do like the story. Keep up the good work!

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Review #2, by ShePotter Same time in the same spot

12th July 2010:
Good writing, but it needs a ending.this is not complete, please.

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