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Review #1, by LindanMalfoy Scars and Jam Jars

6th August 2010:
I really like your style of writing. It's very easy to read. The store is very interesting as well.

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Review #2, by Hazel_glass Scars and Jam Jars

26th July 2010:
Very nice. I am quite intrigued. I like how you have built Draco's character so far. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it :)

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Review #3, by emmynemmy Memory Loss

24th July 2010:
Oh wow, that was great, your righting is so enjoyable to read. I will be watching this story, I hope an update comes soon, this story has a lot of promise. Thank you for a fresh idea.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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Review #4, by Dalek194 Memory Loss

6th July 2010:
Excellent work! Your detailed and descriptive writing is a joy to read and you portray Draco very well; I like where he was thinking about and regretting his arrogant past. You really get inside his head well. I really enjoyed it, please update soon!

One tiny thing; once or twice you have mispelt "thought" and said "though" instead. Besides that, though, there are almost no errors, and it flows very well! Well done :-)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter (sorry it's taken so long to reply, I only just figured out you don't get email alerts, haha). And thanks for pointing out the errors, I will go back and fix those.
It's very encouraging to hear you like it =)

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