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Review #1, by bluecharlotte

Heartless

27th September 2010:

You should seriously continue this story, make Sirius find out about it... I'm so sad :'(

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Review #2, by Siriusly_Siobhan2010

Heartless

3rd September 2010:

Oh my god. That was amazingly tragic. Lovin' it!

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Review #3, by bee

Heartless

2nd September 2010:

wow,
tragic but i think it's really good. if you continue this story i will
definetely read it.

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Review #4, by Ardeel

Heartless

18th July 2010:

Aw that was sad. Nice job with the challenge! I like the sort of shy character you have; she's oddly intriguing. I find myself wanting to know more about her family like if they were associated with Voldemort, purebloods, etc. To give the options of 'leave him or he dies' is quite a big threat so I was curious how the mother could afford such a threat like that. It would be interesting to have a flashback of the arguement between the mother and daughter =).

Thank you for participating in the challenge! You did a lovely job =).

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Review #5, by abbymalfoy

Heartless

12th July 2010:

oh my god. im crying now! i love it!

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Review #6, by Mrs_Black215

Heartless

5th July 2010:

oOMG!!! i was like crying!! i know this is one-shot but if u want 2 can u plz make it a short story/novel?? It's brill!! :)

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