Ohhh, weddings :)
I want to know more about your mysterious MC!!! Who is he?! The poor dear... Maybe you could add in a memory of the MC and Lucy together or something.
Another great story! Congrats and ta ta!Author's Response: I was thinking of making into a story but I have no idea where to go with it so those questions will probably never be answered! Thanks for the awesome reviews!! Report Review
I think I'm going to cry! The idea of unrequited love just breaks my heart :(
I think this piece was beautifully written, and it leaves me with so many questions! I'm dying to know why Lucy choose someone else. Sequel? *bats eyes innocently*
-Ronsgirl29Author's Response: Yay!! I'm so glad you liked it!! I was thinking of turning it into a story but it all depends on time :) Thanks for the review! Report Review
Wow, so many questions raised! Like who was the narrator, who was Lucy marrying, what happened to their relationship. And oddly enough I wonder if it was a secret relationship seeing as the narrator doesn't recognise Lucy's father. Then again that raises the question why are they at the wedding so! Lol apart from all my questions or maybe because of, I really enjoyed this. You captured the helpnessless and heartbreak of the situation in a few simple words and ignoring my curiousity you didn't need anything extra :)Author's Response: :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I was thinking of making it into a story rather then a one shot and then all your questions would be answer but we'll see how that goes :) Thanks for the review! Report Review
OOoOOO, intriging. Who was it that you were thinking of when writing this? I assume it could be a number of people, anyone in the world. This was really short yet you didn't seem to be missing a single thing. It was sad and I really felt for someone who's name I didn't even know. Great job!
:)BaletGirAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I dont really know who I was writing about.. hahah :) Report Review
This was really beautiful but it was so short! I guess there's something to be said about capturing so much emotion and heartache in so little words. I don't know, though. I want so much more!
I can't really think of anything else to say. The plot was great, there wasn't much about the characters to characterize, your grammar seems to be just fine, and it flowed smoothly. All I can say is that I would have loved to see more. ^^
-Dem-Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm really glad you liked it :) Report Review
I saw your post at the forums and I thought I'd come and check this out :)
This was beautiful. You understood the characters pain perfectly and I so wanted Lucy to run out of her wedding. I'm sad to look that this is a one shot, it really would act like a prologue to a story or something. I wanted to learn more about their past, why Lucy married another guy etc.
It was brilliant.
I really enjoyed it.
10/10Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much! I literally can't stop smiling :) I'm so glad you like it! It actually means alot coming from you as I love your story The World, Biscuits And Sirius Black According To Nellie O'Neill! :) Report Review
Wow, there is a whole multi-chaptered fic just screaming to get out of that One Shot!! Very well done with both color and character. I gotta say, I would have loved to see more. I'm left with that feeling of "No! You can't just end it there!!"
Yes, so full points on the suspence angle. LOL Very nice one shot. Thank you for taking my challenge. :D --JennaAuthor's Response: Thanks for such a wonderful review :) It made my day! Report Review
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