I liked how for the most part, it was almost all dialogue which is something I've never seen before, but it was enough to tell the entire story. It was short and sweet, but told an amazing story.Author's Response: I just kind of wrote it all at once, four year olds don't really put that much thought behind words, you know? But I got stuck like that when they were adults too. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for your review Report Review
this story was AMAZING!!! i loved it!Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked or loved it, I wrote it just for you (but not really). Thank you for your review Report Review
Aww that was sweet! I liked the way you kept the bit with the star in both years. I loved that there weren't many spelling mistakes which made it miles easier to read! Yay for you! ~Izzy 9Author's Response: Thank you, I'm trying to get better with the spelling mistakes, and how could I not keep the star? It was my favorite part. Thank you for your review. Report Review
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