This was really good. It gave the essential background information we need to understand a story, and wasn't too complex. There were a few mishaps in punctuation, but it didn't really matter. My favourite part was when she was describing Diagon Alley. You wrote that really well. Nice work ;) Report Review
Love the story so far! Especially the first part as, well, it's just. I can't find the right word, XD. But, anyways, I can't wait until the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you so much. Report Review
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