Reading Reviews for Sirius Black
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Ms Malfoy Chapter One

20th August 2010:
This was really good. It gave the essential background information we need to understand a story, and wasn't too complex. There were a few mishaps in punctuation, but it didn't really matter.

My favourite part was when she was describing Diagon Alley. You wrote that really well.

Nice work ;)

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Review #2, by Maybe Someday Chapter One

28th June 2010:
Love the story so far! Especially the first part as, well, it's just. I can't find the right word, XD.
But, anyways, I can't wait until the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

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