it was good! i liked it and it was better than you said it would be.

Author's Response: Thanks. And, happy you liked it better than I do. Again, thanks a million!

~P.O.P

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THIS IS ALSO REALLY GOOD ANNABELLE
I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY
KEEP WRITIN
XD

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm super happy you liked the chapter. At least someone likes it.
~ P.O.P.

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REALLY GOOD ANNABELLE
IM GLAD U MADE THIS
IT WAS EXTREMELY GOOD
IF U HADNT SAID THAT IT WAS UR FIRST I WOULDNT NO BECAUSE IT WAS AWESOME

Author's Response: Thanks for Reviewing!
~P.O.P. (haha, onomatopoeia)

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THIS 1 IS GOOD TOO
PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I want to write another one, but the writing style won't fit, I've got a dilemma...sigh. Thanks for reviewing!

~P.O.P.

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hey annabelle,
I really like ur story so far!
Don't abandon it!

Author's Response: Thanks! Anyway, I think instead of abandoning it, I'll just rewrite it, yeah? What do you think? I might do a worse job, though. Thanks for reviewing!

princess of paris

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this is an awesome story can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll start to write the next chapter tomorrow. Seriously, reviews are the best! Thanks, again!

princess of paris

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This seems interesting

Author's Response: Thanks. Hopefully it will be even more interesting in the next chapters.

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that was excellent! i really like how u cange characters!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked the story.

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I love this and the way you've set out the narrative in everyones different voice :)

Author's Response: thanks. and if you're wondering, the narrative in everyones different voice was to introduce the different characters and their personalities.

Glad you liked it!

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