Woah. That was very creepy, and I loved it! I am almost in tears myself, and I'm not too sure why! But it was fantastically written, and it keeps me craving more! Truely wonderful!! If it was possible, I would give you 100/10, but since it is not, I am forced to make it 10/10. Keep up the good work, and happy writing!
~Hayleekins

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I'll think about more creepy stories to write, but for now, my head is in drama mode ;) and happy mode :)
x Sjoeks

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Please continue this.
Its very good so far =]

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, but it's a oneshot, so it won't be continued.

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Wow, this was really well written. I think you handled the suspense really well, and loved your prose.
Nice work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! My mother hated it :p so I'm glad to see that there are people who like it :)

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nice start. i can't wait til you write more. i know others will like it to. be sure that i will continue reading. good luck.

Author's Response: Thank you, but it's not really a start, but a oneshot :) I think I should put that in the summary, 'cause your not the first to think it'll continue ... :s

But I'm glad you liked it :)

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woah, this is the first horror fic i've read so i can't really offer any constructive advice or whatever but i can give ego boosts =] im good at them. This was a great opener it had me hooked right away wanting to know what was chasing sirius and it had a really great pace.

can't wait for the que to open so i can read the next chapter.

Liz.

Author's Response: Yay ^^ My ego is boosted :p thanks!

But it's kind of a oneshot, so there won't be a next chapter :s sorry

x Sjoeks

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Gah i wish it could be longer ;] wow i thought that was amazing!!! o.O Who the hell is shadowman? It can't be Voldermort..?
Anyway, that was brilliant, I thoroughly enjoyed it. You have a nice style of writing =]

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

To be honest, I don't know who Shadowman is ^^ it was just someone I invented while writing the story :)

I'm not so good with longer stories. I bore people easily ^^

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