You can start to see the bond between Sirius and Hayley! Yay! Will they grow even more as their relationship progresses? Will the whole school eventually find out! Mas! Mas! (More! More!)Author's Response: I am trying to write as fast as possible, too bad i had to give my computer back to my school. Once my dad gives me his laptop there will be mas! lol Report Review
I like how Sirius is mature in this. He's shocked by the news, but yet he masks his emotions and tries to make the best of the situation. He knows he's done wrong and that his past choices are determining how Hayley feels about him. This chapter doesn't joke around about Hayley's mood swings, the story just simply mentions it as if it were a normal aspect to the plot. Perfect if you ask me! Good luck in the future on writing this series!Author's Response: Hayley is going to be very mood swingy (if that is even a word) But I always liked the idea of Sirius being mature, especially when something unplanned happens. Report Review
I'm starting to like this...a lot! It's so fast and gets to the point on the plot. Not like these other stories where the authors take a year to get to the actual point everyone's been waiting for!
So the father is Sirius...now, that'll be interesting. Sirius now has a fanfic child..hmm...ought to be a unique one.Author's Response: Thank you =) Report Review
For a first chapter, i'd have to say this is one of the better light reads I've seen so far this summer!Author's Response: Thank you =) Report Review
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