THAT SONG IS AMAZING! Just had to put that out there. This story is really good! I don't know WHY you don't like it. I like it. I especially like the fireworks! ;D Sirius WOULD do that.Author's Response: We Are Padfoot and Prongs,
Haha, yeah, I like the song too. And Sirius likes his fireworks. :D Report Review
Sadly, I have to agree and say that it isn't one of your best. But on the plus side, I can honestly say that I enjoyed it! Which just shows how fantastic of an author you are, because not a lot can make their worst stories this good. In the scope of things, it's still better than a lot of the stories on the archives, including anything i could scrape together.
I really think it was well written! It flowed well, and your descriptions were great! It was just a little too sickly sweet, if you get what I mean. I love fluff, but it was just slightly over the top.
Still, it was a perfect ending to the series! I know that review probably makes no sense, so just take this away from it: You are an amazing writer with amazing one shots! Including this one!
-NaidatheRavenclaw, RavenclawAuthor's Response: NadiatheRavenclaw,
Ohmygosh, I know. It's really bad, and I'm really happy you're telling me as such. I might go rewrite them someday. . . Thank you for the compliments, though, they make my heart smile.
HAH, more fluff. Report Review
hah 6 months and 9 days. Seventeen months and 2 days. ha loved that part! Great job!Author's Response: ginnypotter242,
haha, thanks, lovie! :D Report Review
OMG dumbledore quote! I'm in love :)Author's Response: dancechik15,
haha, i know, dumbledore is awesome. Report Review
My sister's name is Layla...
10/10Author's Response: Captain-Kill-Wormtail,
well. this just got awkward.
i only picked that name because it's similarish to lily, i swear. Report Review
I don't think it was stupid, I really liked it! Good job!
ps: I think I'll put that quote as my msn subnick! :PAuthor's Response: Ah, Florifera, you do bring me such joy with your reviews. :) Report Review
Well it's a lot better than other stories I've read :) not yours, this was the first of yours, but I'll def check out the others if you say they're better :)Author's Response: gremlin,
After a lot of deliberation, I have decided to take that first sentence as a compliment. :) Thank you! :D Report Review
They had decided to meet here because James had said that he had something to ask her, and Sirius had claimed that he and Remus wanted to be there to pick up the pieces when he screwed up.
There were loud bangs! and they broke apart to see fireworks flying around in the small club, taking forms of lobsters.
“Erm…” Lily began, trying not to sound confused, “Wha- Are those lobsters?”
He stared at the flashing shell fish, open mouthed for a few moments before looking at his new fiancé with puzzlement.
“I did not plan this,” He muttered, reaching in another pocket and taking out a many-creased piece of parchment and unfolding it quickly, studying it intently.
“Plan?” She asked, and his cheeks tinted pink but he didn’t answer, continuing to mutter over the piece of paper before dragging her over to a hysterical Sirius and Mary and an amused Remus, Alice, and Frank.
“I specifically said ‘NO FIREWORKS’, Padfoot! AND YOU GOT THEM IN LOBSTER FORM?!” James hissed, gesturing to the lobster shaped fireworks, which were now crawling around.
omg!! haha!1 i LOVED it!!Author's Response: kassandra466,
So happy to keep hearing that. :D Thanks for the review! Report Review
This was a complete pleasure to read. It was funny, and light, and sweet, - everything I expected of you! Such a great one I encourage you to write more!Author's Response: evanlyn,
I am so happy, I worked hard to keep it upbeat, and boy was it hard with the freakishly depressing other L/J fic I'm working on. But, it appears that I got it good enough.
Thank you! :D Report Review
This was pretty good in a small, random, cute way. I was kind of expecting it to be a little bit wilder from the summery, but it was still interesting. I loved how everyone was screaming non-stop in the begining - talk about vocal! Cheers!Author's Response: Moments Reprieve,
Heylo, M.R. -hehe, just like Mr. But not. Moving on...- I am happy to hear that. And yeah, it could have been random, but you know, I'm all about surprises. XD Glad you liked it anyways. :D Cheers! Report Review
I really liked it! I haven't read your other stories (that I can remember), and normally I don't really read James/Lily pairings because they're usually sort of boring but I was in the mood for romance so I thought seeing James' proposal to Lily would perfectly quench my thirst for fluffiness and loved-up-ness. And it was perfect, also funny, I like the lobster/cheese fireworks :)Author's Response: NobodyKnowsHowToTalkToChildren,
I am so glad you liked it. :D And I hope you do take the time to read the other stories, but if you don't that's okay... ;) Yep, those fireworks are obviously the best part.
Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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