{reviewid: 2447883, reviewer: 'Moony%20lvr%21%21'}
10th December 2010:
that sucked i wish i could give it a negative 5
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{reviewid: 2429954, reviewer: 'KarmaBlack'}
31st October 2010:
Well... it was really confusing. I even thought she was a guy for the first few sections until she started putting on make up...? I didn't really know what was happening, and everything was going back and forth and switching and stuff and I got lost in it all o_O
The writing itself was good though! I really like the whole 'James is as bad as Snape always said he was thing' although I didn't put two and two together till I read it in your author's note. I still enjoyed reading it
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{reviewid: 2425312, reviewer: 'Cinderpelt4'}
18th October 2010:
Interesting concept rather macabre, but well organized nonetheless
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{reviewid: 2422233, reviewer: 'Leanne'}
10th October 2010:
s'lovely, and morbid but in a good way
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{reviewid: 2420265, reviewer: 'kanak'}
5th October 2010:
i had searched for a james lily fanfic. but this story came up. I m glad as well as sad that it did. It is such a fine piece of writing.The reader can feel that dread and that bitterness that is mixed immiscibly in the story. Though i can never imagine James like that. Thank you anyway for such reading experience. 9/10 because is have a soft corner for James.
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{reviewid: 2415284, reviewer: 'katebabelovesharrypotter'}
22nd September 2010:
that was depressing but very good and eye-opening.
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{reviewid: 2413837, reviewer: 'TravelingHermione'}
18th September 2010:
This is an amazing story even though it is really upsetting. You did a great job of writing it.
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{reviewid: 2412068, reviewer: 'Hyenni'}
13th September 2010:
That was very well-written, and your inspiration that perhaps James was evil like Snape said was a great idea - not a nice idea morally, but to write - powerful stuff.
Well done! ^^ 9/10
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{reviewid: 2411554, reviewer: 'the%20king'}
12th September 2010:
that was just stupid james would never rape anyone and that was just a weird ass story
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{reviewid: 2411493, reviewer: 'DownWithTheCarrows113'}
12th September 2010:
Wow. This was such a powerful story, and the ending made me cry. When Remus wrote that he loved her, did he mean loved loved? Like did he fancy her? Just wondering, because I gathered the clues from the story and wonder if they're true.
Author's Response: It just depends on how you interpret it. Like he was her best guy friend, so um, yeah it just depends.
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{reviewid: 2411400, reviewer: 'SparklexPink'}
11th September 2010:
This reminds me of the book "Speak". I liked it.
Author's Response: I love that book. Thanks. :p
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