This was so beautiful! I loved it. It makes me love summer and Teddy/Victoire more than I already do. Awesome job!Author's Response: Awe thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
Awe I love it! I don't normally read Teddy/Victorie but this was so sweet! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :D Report Review
Aww- this one shot was adorable. ^_^ Thank you so much for posting it!
I thought it was lovely how, in the beginning, you create Victoire's vividly excitable, seemingly out-there character, but in the end it turns out that Victoire is as grounded as Teddy. She's energetic and living in her daydreams because she loves him; she doesn't want the night to end. It's the rush she needs because she's facing the challenge of being away from him for a year. She knows it isn't possible to just run away from the moment she says it, but she's desperately trying to hide from her sadness in exhilaration.
It's beautiful, in the end, how she confronts it with Teddy by her side, thinking of what their future is. She doesn't just childishly deny what the next day holds--as she does in the beginning, a bit-- but she accepts it with grace.
^_^ At least that's what I got from it, anyway. Keep writing! It was lovely.
HallowsAuthor's Response: Awe, thank you so much! You would never believe how excited I was to see that there was a review! I was slightly worried. :p
Anyway, that is exactly how I was hoping people would perceive this story. A love that is just sweet and innocent, but also that there really is deepness hidden underneath.
Thanks so much again! I'm so happy you liked it. ^_^ Report Review
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