Too cute! Harry as a dad is just adorable. I love the Potter family Report Review
I love this! It's so original and sweet! You also captured Harry really well - I can definitely see him bluntly telling James to shut up. Well done! Report Review
gnaw!! That's such a sweet story. I like it! Write more stories like this! Good work.Author's Response: haha, sweet does tend to be most people's response to this story, so clearly I did something right :')
there is a sequel to it, if you're interested, but i'm not sure if i'll add to that. so if you really need your potter-kid fix, you'll have to read that instead! sorry! (:
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This was so cute!! ^.^
" army of teenage mutant ninja centaurs to kick butt"
That would be my favorite line! :D :DAuthor's Response: hey backatcha!
i'm so glad you liked it, and 'cute' would definitely be the approach i was going for with this little oneshot! :p
haha, that line was originally something my little cousin once said, but it was 'turtles' instead of 'centaurs'. one might say i transfigured it (;
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This was so adorable!
Now that I've read this, I've found myself in the same predicament that James was in. I don't know my favorite color! Ah!Author's Response: awh, don't worry, my favourite colour changes with my mood, so you're not alone in not knowing it! when i read this review, my favourite colour matches James'. now i quite like the grey of the box i'm writing in (;
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OMG THIS WAS SO CUTE < 3Author's Response: awh, thank you!
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That was SO cute! Awww :DAuthor's Response: Haha, cute? i like to think so :')
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ahh this was so sweet- i really enjoyed it. the ending inparticular made me smile a lot- i look forward to reading the sequal :)Author's Response: 'sweet' is definitely the approach i was going for with this story - so phew! i'm really glad you liked this story, it's perhaps my most popular one to date, so thank you for adding to that!
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“Lily is your new sister,” Ginny explained, and signalled to Harry to lift James up onto the bed. “Now, she’s quite little and a bit red, so - ”
“Don’t like red,” James muttered. Ginny gave Harry a quizzical look, and he simply mouthed the words ‘Tell you later’.
favorite part. this was adorable, i loved it.Author's Response: awh, that's one of the parts i'm most proud of XD i'm glad you liked it!
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aaawww tht was super cute, and thanks for naming the kids correctly :)Author's Response: awwwh, thank you! i'm so glad you liked it, and no problem, i wouldn't dream of naming them anything else :)
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This was the CUTEST story EVER! :D I absolutely love it. Also, James's favorite color is blue. That's mine too. :) This was so adorable. Definitely one of my favorite fanfics ever.Author's Response: I love blue. I just love it. So obviously, I was extremely happy to get it in the challenge! lol, i'm so happy you liked the story! 'cute' and 'adorable' was what I was going for, so to hear you say that just takes the biscuit :D
and one of your favourites?! *squee!* I LOVE YOU. ...hehe, now it'll be awkward. i'm sorry.
thank you for such a lovely review! ^^
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This made me giggle :3 10/10
~Annabella~Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it made you laugh, this was my first voyage into comedy, so it means a lot for you to find this...funny :') cheers for the rating!
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Interesting little adventure you made up. Enjoyed reading it. :)Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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loved it. it really made sense it was humerous and so sweet. of course harry would say red, cause it's his fave color. green would be in in the picture cause of harry's eyes (ginny's fave color) and then to have lily's eyes blue like al her uncles, it's so sweet!Author's Response: Ah, you got my logic! I figured gold for Harry, then thought it might be a bit girly and went for red xD And of course, Albus had to have green - maybe a little hint at Harry's eyes there, or at his middle name - and Lily, well - I figured blue fitted in nicely and it was also given to me in the challenge xD
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its absolutely adorable!
i love it!
wonderful writing! (:Author's Response: Ah, I'm so glad you like my little Potter-offspring oneshots, they were such a total pleasure to write, Sky in particular, so to know I'm not the only one who enjoyed them is always wonderful!
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This is so cute. I love seeing the characters in somewhat "normal" roles as opposed to always fighting something or someone. It's fun seeing how Harry could defeat Voldemort but have trouble containing two small children. Great, great job.Author's Response: Same, I absolutely love just writing normal characters, without some life/death issue hanging over them...plus, it's so much more cheery to write, y'know? :P
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Adorable story! God James is so cute :D Love it.Author's Response: Awh, I'm so glad you liked it! :) Thanks for the lovely review! ^^ Report Review
I LUV this SO much! I was thinking a you should do a prequel when james's first word is something like "Bloody Merlin"!
Just a thought... PLEASE keep doing more stories
xxxChessie17924xxxAuthor's Response: Ah, another happy reviewer! I'm so mega-super-happy that you enjoyed it, and I have definitely been thinking of expanding these stories - feel free to check out Cowboys and Indians, and who knows? Perhaps I will descend into the nightmare of toddler-James :S
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Aww its so sweet! I loved James' quest to know what his favourite colour was :P And Albus lived up to Potter and Weasley standards perfectly!
James' favourite colour being Lily's sky blue eyes was cute!! Almost too much to bear!
I love Harry as a dad. He reminds me of my brother-in-law and his kids. (they have 3 sons :P) It's quite hysterical to watch.
~IzzyAuthor's Response: I'm actually so pleased you enjoyed it! 'Sweet' and 'cute' were my main aims in this story, of course, so it's wonderful that I accomplished htem!
Ah, I wish I had a Dad like Harry, he seems so funny, and so patient :P Ah, children are hilarious to watch, so I'm glad you felt this little story went okay! :')
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Good one. Very funny ^_^Author's Response: Ahaha, thanks! Such a short, sweet little review, this made me smile :')
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Awww that's such a sweet (and funny) story!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Feel free to check out the sequal, 'Cowboys and Indians' for more Potter children fluff :')
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aw sooo sweeet :D love it!Author's Response: Awh, I'm glad you found it sweet! It was most definitely meant to be sweet. The 'aww' factor was my main aim ;)
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Oh my goodness! You should put a warning not to read it when you have to be quiet. I was trying not to laugh so hard, I ended up snorting! That was so good! So hilarious!!! Oh my gosh! 10/10Author's Response: Haha, I'll have to see about that warning...wouldn't want to take away the surprise now, would I? :P
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Very nice. I wondered what that would be like. I officially take ur word 4 it.Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, it makes my day!
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I love it! I laughed out loud when James started having a fit about hating red and not knowing his favorite color... so funny! And it was a good comparison with fighting Voldemort and looking after children :D I can't wait to read the sequel XD Keep writing!Author's Response: Awh! I'm glad you loved it, and thanks so much for telling me your favourite parts! I'm glad you like his little fits about the colours, and the comparison xD
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