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Review #1, by MischiefMitched Goddesses of the Harvest, Scheming Brothers, and Utterly Mad Blokes

1st October 2010:
ElegantPhoenix,

I very much enjoyed the first chapter, "Goddesses of the Harvest, Scheming Brothers, and Utterly Mad Blokes" of The Chronicles of Demi Nichols. I think it's a fun and fast read in which any reader is able to relate to the hilarious protagonist. I laughed and laughed at the line, “Merlin, you’re like a cat who’s just realized it’s about to be given a bath," and look forward to continuing the story in the near future! Great job!

Cheers, MischiefMitched (Author of Poison Ivie)

Author's Response: I'm very happy to hear that you enjoyed the chapter so far, and I hope that the rest of the story is to your liking as well :) Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

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Review #2, by katebabelovesharrypotter Heroes, Daft Uncles, and Near Death Experiences

21st September 2010:
You are just too funny. I like that you don't seem to TRY to be funny, it's like it comes out naturally. I applaud that you can make things seem natural and realistic.

Author's Response: Thank you :P I never really believed that I was funny until I recieved over a hundred reviews telling me otherwise. So I suppose I'll just have to accept it. Mind you, that's not a bad thing! I'm absolutely thrilled! Thank you so much, again :)

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Review #3, by katebabelovesharrypotter Goddesses of the Harvest, Scheming Brothers, and Utterly Mad Blokes

21st September 2010:
I think this is really great beginning. You captured my interest almost immeadiately and made me want to keep reading.

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you thought so. I'm glad that I managed to keep your interest and persuade you to read on to the next chapter. Hopefully, I don't disappoint with this story! It's not one of my bests :/ But thank you, thank you, thank you for all of the wonderful reviews!

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Review #4, by Twinklestar Heroes, Daft Uncles, and Near Death Experiences

19th September 2010:
YAY :D I love this so far. It's so different from the other stories on HPFF, and I've never seen this idea. Argus Filch's neice at Hogwarts. (: Excellent idea!

Fabulous start! I hope to see more soon (:

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story so far, and that you think my idea is different. I hadn't ever seen a story centered around Argus Filch and/or his family (I don't think anyone's ever acknowledged the fact that he even had a family, even if it does seem like it's always been just him and Mrs. Norris..), so I thought I'd give it a shot. A plot bunny came to me and I set to work. So I'm very glad to know that you like it :D Thanks again for taking the time to read and review!

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Review #5, by Twinklestar Goddesses of the Harvest, Scheming Brothers, and Utterly Mad Blokes

17th August 2010:
I really like this story! please please update!! (:

Author's Response: Ah, thank you! The next chapter is currently in progress. Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

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Review #6, by Friday_Star Goddesses of the Harvest, Scheming Brothers, and Utterly Mad Blokes

1st July 2010:
oh, how intriguing (: i like her name, it's very cute :D :D

i like how you incorporated the sentence (:

keep up the good work
xx

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter, and liked how I incorporated the sentence. It took a bit of pushing and shoving my imagination (which was kicking and screaming and refusing to come up with anything good) so it's nice to know I've done alright. :) Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

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Review #7, by Hyenni Goddesses of the Harvest, Scheming Brothers, and Utterly Mad Blokes

26th June 2010:
Wow! This story is SO funny!

I absolutely love Demi's character. She's got just the right amount of sarcasm and craziness and I think that Justin is brilliant - I'm glad you've already incorporated him into the story, and in such an amusing way! If I had to choose a favourite moment, I would probably say something like:

"Kill me now.

You know, if you’re not busy."

That made me laugh, although there were other moments in this chapter that made me giggle too :)

Please update soon, and I'm glad you're doing so well with my challenge so far! ^^

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. :) It took a lot of time for me to think of a good enough plot for the challenge, but once I pulled in fridaystar's challenge as well (where I was given a sentence to work with) I just sort of built up from there. I'm happy that you like Demi's character, too. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

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