I loved it! It was funny and cute!
10/10Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :) Thanks for reviewing :D Report Review
Hmm very funny and interesting :)
I liked that it was unique and unlike anything I've read before!
I enjoyed it and I hope you do more one shots because I love them!
:)Author's Response: Thank you! Unique?? Wow, thanks! That does mean a lot to hear that it wasn't just another silly little fluff piece like a million others you've read. Which I definitely sort of felt like it was...>< I will definitely try and write some more one-shots! Thanks for reviewing!! :D Report Review
haha this was quite, quite amusing (: a few of the sentences were a bit confusing but on the whole i rather liked it (:
xxAuthor's Response: Aww thanks! Eek what was confusing? I hope there wasn't too much. Thanks so much for reviewing and for creating that awesome challenge!! Report Review
That was a very... interesting read and quite unlike anything i've read before. I liked it though. 10/10 for your unique writing style and making me laugh.
“Hi,” he replies, making absolutely no attempt to disguise his voice to be that of Lois’s. Because, presumably, Lois might have a higher pitched voice than Louis. But you never know, he is only fourteen."
Ha! lots of love and continue writing!Author's Response: Wow, thanks! 10/10?? I did not expect that. I'm glad I made you laugh! That was definitely my ultimate goal with this story ^^ Thanks for putting in a favourite quote! That's always helpful :D Thanks so much for reviewing, and I definitely will!! Keep reading! Heehee. Report Review
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