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Review #1, by browneyedbrunette I did

4th February 2011:
Love it! It was a little rocky from a guys pov but it was still great.

Author's Response: :D thank you so much! Yeah guy's pov was a new challenge type thing. I think I'll have to do some more research before i write another. *puts on mustache and ventures out into the world*

thanks for the review! xo mc


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Review #2, by philly94 I did

29th June 2010:
loved the plot line, great job :) I liked the story from Harry's POV

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.

m_c


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Review #3, by mythreyee I did

23rd June 2010:
great job ya..do keep writing..

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I will most definitely keep writing.

m_c


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Review #4, by Ginnygal I did

23rd June 2010:
Aaah! :))

Guys are SO weird!

Author's Response: Indeed they are...:) Thank you for your review!

m_c


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Review #5, by Dalek194 I did

23rd June 2010:
A nice sweet little one-shot. You use dramatic irony well as the reader can tell Ginny is pregnant, and it's agonising seeing Harry rip himself up over nothing. I have one or two things that could be better;

-Teddy doesn't live with Harry and Ginny; he lives with Andromeda, and just visits them a lot.

-I know Ginny probably has raging emotions because of the pregnancy, but Harry acts like she cries a lot, whereas one of the things he always loved about her is that she hardly ever cries (see HBP/DH)

-The way Harry thinks when she is snapping at him is very un-Harry-like; when he thinks, "If it was divorce she was hoping to talk to me about tonight, I was looking forward to it. I was tired of her yelling at me and dropping all of her stupid girly vases." and "I was beginning to loathe that voice" I don't think he would ever think that about Ginny, he loves her (angry or not)

Sorry for being so critical, there are lots of positives too. I like the way you describe things, e.g. "Her eyes were shining excitedly, sardonically I suppose" is very good detail, and I like your writing style. Good work, you have done well.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving your review, your critique was helpful! Positive reviews are great, but critique lets me grow. I'm glad you liked it and I hope to hear from you again!

m_c


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Review #6, by emmapotter12 I did

23rd June 2010:
I LOVED this story. It was so funny! I had to read it out loud to my two sisters and we couldn't stop laughing. It was so good that I had to leave a review which I have never done before. Keep up the good work, you're amazing!

Author's Response: Wow!! Thank you so much for reviewing, and I'm so glad you liked it! Reviews mean so much to all the authors here, believe me!

:) m_c


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Review #7, by Mrs HJ Potter I did

22nd June 2010:
I thought it was very funny, cute and just perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it!

m_c


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