I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS
PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS AND I ACCEPT YOUR APOLOGY Report Review
Cliff-hangers are my sworn enemy,
but since I like your story I'll let it go,
just this once. But seriously I frickin' love this story. Baby sisters unite!!! Report Review
I really love this! Please can you write more asap thanks :D Report Review
OMG yuss!! You updated! I'm so excited!
Okay, so this chapter was, like DRAMA! I hope nothing happens to Rome, that would be terrible!
Love this story Report Review
O my god!! You better write another chapter soon, this is just so good!! And for some reason i have a feeling that things dont go to well with Rose, but im sure you wont let that happen.
WRITE ON!! Report Review
It's an awesome theme.
continue it, and you're the best Report Review
Long time no see. :P
Poor Rome but thats what you get for messing around after dark with jerks like Regulus running around.
I Hope Rome will make it. And the Marauders would personally handle Regulus, its what their personalities are like.
~Lilygirl Report Review
No! That's just not right! Regulas may have been a prat, but he wasn't seriously evil. Malfoy and Nott are set to be Death Eaters. The different reactions really shows how Regulas could have joined up, and then backed out and turned against Voldemort later. But Rome! poor Rome! You actually had me tearing up a bit there. Brain damage is serious, and people are never the same after. They become more irritable, and have memory problems that, if they don't necessarily affect those before the accident, will affect short-term and long term memory afterwards. I really hope she gets better without too many lasting affects, and is still the person Lucas wanted to be with when she does. When everyone finds out what happened, Malfoy and Nott (and probably Black too) will be sorry. I really hope they get caught. Report Review
I love you. You are the most amazing person.Author's Response: I love you as well, my super amazing reviewer. I'm working on the next chapter right now. It'll be up soon! :) Report Review
AH! I MISSED YOU SO MUCH!!! Thank goodness you are back with such a climatic chapter as well. I saw this at the top of my faves and I was like "VICTORY SCREECH LULULULULULULULULU!"
Oh yes, 10/10 and Welcome back! Hope you are here to stay :)
~~VAuthor's Response: I MISSED YOU TOO! *insert internet hug of epicness and love* I AM SO SO SORRY FOR SUCH A LONG BREAK, AND I WILL NEVER DO ANYTHING OF THAT SUCH AGAIN. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Seriously. You review on like everything and it means so much to me. You rock! :) Report Review
Ohh this is such a great story!! Please dont give up on it and update soon!!! And I really think Regulus likes her; if he didnt, he would have attacked her! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! And I am currently writing the next chapter!! Regulus is a complicated kid. He isn't sure whether not wanting to hurt Rome is due to feelings or just morality issues. Keep an eye on Regulus! He's got a future in this story;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
I do think Rome is doing the right thing. Remus is her brother after all. And in my opinion, family comes before friends any day.Author's Response: I agree completely. But that won't stop her from feeling guilty. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!! :D Report Review
I like Hailey the best; just because what she did to James and how she devised the plot hahaAuthor's Response: Hailey is a beast! Writing for her is so much fun!! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
OMG YOU UPLOADED! I"M SO HAPPY!
Anyway. *ahem* I'll be normal now.
Aww, Lucas finally got some sense knocked into him. yay. But nice timing. Poor Rome! She better be okay, the girls will fall apart without her! And stupid, stupid Regulaus. (Not even gonna mention the other Slytherins). He's such a creep! Gah. Upload more again, son.
Sorry if this review made no sense. I'm lacking on sleep.
~SaraAuthor's Response: I'm happy you're happy! And I've been surprisingly getting more sleep then normal. Crazy, huh? And Lucas has finally opened his eyes at like the worst time he possibly could have. The girls might just be stronger than you think;) And you gotta give Regulus a little slack! He didn't directly hurt her, but then again, he didn't stop it. But yes, he is quite creepy. And I will be uploading more soon! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
so sad :'( please finishAuthor's Response: I'm working on it!!! I feel bad leaving ya'll like this, but trust me when I say that things start to work out:) All I'm saying. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
It was very good but I didnt know they had sisters...Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm not sure if they actually did, Rome, Hailey, and Mia are all my characters! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
It was very good but I didn't know they all had sisters...Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm not sure if they actually did, Rome, Hailey, and Mia are all my characters! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
i really like it! it has a good plot and i really want to know wat happens next!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had a small break, and now, I'm back and working on an update! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
I don't many marauders ff, I love this on! Update!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you like my story! I hope you continue to read it! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
AAWW that is so sad! Luke and Rome are such a perfect couple!!
But my fav character is Hailey because my friends says that I'm just like her so I hit her. (we are still bff) She now learned not to insult my voice skills.Author's Response: Ohmigosh, you guys talk about my story?? That is so sweet! I love you guys! Virtual hugs for all of you! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! And who knows? Maybe Luke and Rome will find some way to work it out! But then again...:) Report Review
its a great story and i really want to know what happens next in the story. im geussing the pairings are rome/lucas hailey/sirius and mia and someone i dont the name of. please update soon!!!Author's Response: I'm working on an update right now! And keep those pairings in mind, but you never know what I might throw at you:) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!! Report Review
I've just read this and although there is lots of room for improvement :p The story line is AMAZING, I can't wait to read the next part xAuthor's Response: I plan on rewriting it once I finish, but right now, I've still got some more in store for my lovely readers:) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!Author's Response: Working on it as I type! Sorry for the lateness of it... Had a busy few months, but I'm back to working on my stories! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
So I started your story and I love it!! Hope everything works out between Lucas and Rome :) Great Chapter!! Update soon please!Author's Response: Updates are coming now soon? *nervous laugh* Sorry for the wait! I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and reviewing! Report Review
write more ! loved the chapter =DAuthor's Response: I'm working on it:) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!! Report Review
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