Great intro, sweetie. This has amazing potential. But I did notice a few spelling mistakes, which are very easy fixes. I would love to read more of this. :) Over all, a 9 out of 10, which is an Outstanding in my books. (Just fix those spelling mistakes and it'll be a 10 out of 10.) ;)Author's Response: I actually typed the chapter a bit hastily, so maybe there are some mistakes I will correct them as soon as school gives me sometime! Report Review
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