Here for pass the parcel!

Wow, this was one extraordinary piece of writing! I loved the way you wrote it. I first read it top to bottom, and it made perfect sense of course, and then Draco chose to go back home. And then I read bottom to top, and it made perfect sense again (I am really awed how you did that), and then he chose to move forward! Wow, this was one unusual story. I have never read one like this before! Your description of Draco was very apt. In these few 500 something words, I could understand Draco really well. Your narrative was done amazingly. This story was more poetic than a story, but that's what I loved about it. I am aware I am sort of gushing and rambling, so please excuse me, but I am just so in awe right now with your writing style, that I can't seem to form coherent train of thoughts.

Basically, I really enjoyed reading this story. The theme was very reflective and interesting. Your writing style had me floored. Your narrative and Draco's description was done quite well. All in all, this was a piece I enjoyed! I so wish I could write like this too! *Hats off to you*

Awesome work! 10/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!!! OMG I can't believe you read this one! This one was by far my proudest moment. A fantastic story and the most skilled one i have ever written. Don't worry about it. I absolutely adore this review! Thanks again so much for this review!

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Am.Ginny

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love it.. like reading the bottom to top version.. great job!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! That seems to be the most popular version. Thanks again.
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Am. Ginny

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HIII its me again...You write so many good stories! I love them all even though ive only read three so far :) Will you make any new stories soon? 10/10 from me again :)

-Sarah

Author's Response: hahaha sigh you have no idea how much this has made my day! I've been having a hard day, and this (plus hearing from my best friend) made it better. I'm so glad you like them!!! haha hmmm if you go to my author's page on the forums or through another comment and leave a request for a story (anything you want) I will write it just for you! Otherwise I am working on my short story collection then bad to my novel (? maybe it's a Novella). I will have a one-shot up as soon sometime before March 3. :) Thanks again for the review.
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Am. Ginny

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So cute and creative! I liked how the reader could read top to bottom or bottom to top! good job =)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And especially thank you for review the sequel even though you read the first one. This was again a new type for me. I wanted to try the whole reading it two ways for two stories. I really enjoyed this, and surprisingly it wasn't to hard to write. You just have to be very attentive to what you are doing both from top to bottom and bottom to top. Thanks for the review again.
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Am. Ginny

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Wow, that was amazing. I loved how you wrote that. One way is him choosing one path, the other way reading is him choosing the other path. That was brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. :) Thanks for the review.
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Am. Ginny

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Genuis! I loved the twist on the way you wrote it, having 2 stroies, two decisions in one!

I think I'm going to take the bottom to top version lol. I thought you did a really good job with Draco, I love reading & writing stuff that are soley about Draco, he's such an interesting character.

Brilliantly crafted story!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! This story had to have the two endings. That way you know see how he reacted to both of the stories. Everyone I have talked to likes the happy ending. No one seems to like the top to bottom. I've enjoyed your reviews very much, and these have been some of my favorite stories to write. Thanks for the review.
Love,
Am. Ginny

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