You're a fantastic writer! I really enjoyed this!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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It's a good story, though the particular style of writing you use isn't my favourite- it's not that there's anything wrong with it, just personal preference. And I *love* The Killers. It's always great to see fellow fans!

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you liked the story if not the style :)

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OK - that was pretty darn hot, oh yeah, well written too.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it ;)

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There should be 5,000 reads on this - it is the best one shot I have ever read! You need to consider creating a second story, a copy, but remove th song and the "song fic" title. Some readers are anti-song fic, and it would be a crime for anyone to miss this. Fyi, I did enjoy the lyrics, as the gave me time to gasp for air :)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much! I actually considered taking the lyrics out of this when I posted it here but decided to leave them in because I thought they gave a nice break between the sections (and like you said, time for the reader to recover XD). I have no idea if I'd be allowed to post a copy without the lyrics but I'll definitely look into it. Again, thanks so much for the lovely review. I really appreciate it!

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Really well written. I'm a closet Hermione/Harry fan and this makes it work.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Hermione/Harry is so much fun to write. I love them together!

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Just beautiful. Steamy and sexy. I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I do have a follow up companion piece on the Mugglenet Fanfiction archive called "To Make Things Right, To See It All".

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Intense and I loved it!,great work.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it :)

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Well written. Wonderful imagery and teasing.
Will be looking for other stories by author.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I don't actually have any other fics on this archive yet but I do have quite a few on the Mugglenet Fanfiction archive under the same pen-name. Again, thanks for the lovely review.

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