great job! seems like you're the the only one that remembered that it was remus that was prefect not james. I thought it was a little weird that she'd been so upset to drink and have sex with him, and then not do anything about a relationship later. But I thought it was great the way the story was as a whole :) great job!Author's Response: I had originally wanted to make this into a full length story. I basically made the outline then filled it in and posted it as it was so a few things might be missing. And since I LOVE Remus, I felt credit was due where it was intended. Thank you for reviewing and keep reading! ~Free_Chicken_Soup2 Report Review
awe this was actually really cute! it would've made a great novella/novel, but it works just as great as this! great writing! :D Report Review
KEEP WRITING!! AMAZING Report Review
short lives..so sad. this story was so cool, how u managed to, well, condense it into one chapter!! brilliant! Report Review
very nice story, i love the way you describe James , he's so cute :) Report Review
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