Yes! This was a lot more intense than Breathe Slow, and I really have to say I like this one better, but you know, I am a plot person.. So I keep wondering what must have happened before this and all.. But really, nice for a one shot, its a good read. Definitely.

Author's Response: I like this one better too. I think I'm better at writing more melancholic stories, and I believe this one had a small hint of sadness in it.
Thank you so much!

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I thought this story was very well written. Passionate and intense, not too short and not too long.
Perfect. (:
~Meliah

Author's Response: Oh now, don't say perfect. My ego = WHOOSH, out of the room.
Thanks so much x3

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I DONT UNDERSTAND.
WHY ARE YOUR STORIES SO CUTE AND AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL?
er.i dont even know anymore.
I just love them so much.
I realy love your One-Shots. They're all short and concise and cute and stuff. So write more, yo.


Author's Response: This seriously means a lot to me, especially that you want me to write more. Really, thank you.
(:

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I was so happy when I saw that someone made a fanfic with this song :D It's a short but sweet fanfic. Good job :D

Author's Response: It is a lovely song, and the one stuck in my head the whole time I wrote this (which is basically why I wrote it).
Thanks xx

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well i think a certain amount of cheese and cliche is good for the world :) loved it! what was the song?? :)

Author's Response: It's called Catch Me by Demi Lovato (:
Thank you for the review! x

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