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Review #1, by mystery_reader

25th February 2011:

i have just sat and read this whole story.

ill be honest at first it was a bit disjointed and i was confused but it also intrigued me so i read on!

i absolutly loved it!! the idea behind the story is amazing and i think you have done amazingly well to sew the plot together to create this story!!

it has a proper good family link and in some ways it seems that hugh has the kinda same propeties as a young harry potter. this might seem a weird link but to me its like hugh is clever strong and has a mentality of family like harry!!

10/10 and i loved it completely!!!

Author's Response: Dear Mystery_Reader,

Thank you for appreciation and your critique. I always enjoy reading that someone enjoyed my story. I will also review the first few chapters in light of your comment about the beginning being a bit disjointed. The beginning of any story is the hook that pulls the reader into the story and critical to whether or not the story ends up being read.

Again, thank you,
K Stahl

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Review #2, by Maybe Someday

First Contact

28th June 2010:

Lovely story.
The story so far is definitely quite original, & I really enjoyed reading it so far!
I'll be reading the next few chapters soon, ^^.

Author's Response: Dear Maybe Someday,

Thank you. I hope you enjoy it. It's all there, no waiting.

Yours truly,
K Stahl

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