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Review #1, by theelderwand Hermione is Coming, Look Busy

13th June 2010:
DP!

Great to see you back and this was a great tale. Yep, looks like your exams were definitely a painful experience; but it definitely gave you some great inspiration here. Identify with Hermione much? LOL! You've got her down PERFECTLY.

This has to be my favorite part:

"he said happily, for some reason giving Snape a little pair of high heels. He then did a little bat in the corner, with pointy little teeth, and a lot of bushy hair. Harry had to suppress a snort, which he turned into a spluttery cough."

Absolutely spot on characterizations here of everybody.

The "bewitched clock" was great! But I think my favorite part was Ron's brilliant strategy to get Hermione to go to bed, by nearly flirting with her (or maybe he actually was flirting with her?)

Great stuff DP.

TEW

P.S. I sent you a pm.

Author's Response: I'm a bit like Hermione when it comes to exams, though maybe not as obsessive... I certainly don't make timetables for myself, let alone my friends!

Hmm was he indeed? I suspect he was flirting, though whether he was aware of it or not is another story... :D

Thank you for reviewing!


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Review #2, by Kenna Hermione is Coming, Look Busy

9th June 2010:
Nice story! I have upcoming exams too, my first ever, and I am very stressed. This lovely one-shot makes me feel much better, though! I loved tyrant-Hermione and Ron's awesome doodling. You always have the most creative and hilarious stories! I loved hte ending too, very Ron-ish :)

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Review #3, by kathy Hermione is Coming, Look Busy

8th June 2010:
Brilliant, really brilliant :) cute and funny, if you could, write a follow up where hermione and ron are dating and they're supposed to be working but, alas, ron's QUITE the distraction ;) just a thought.once again: brilliant :)

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Review #4, by lumos_ Hermione is Coming, Look Busy

8th June 2010:
Haha! This is hilarious. My favourite line ' Another was that the clock was actually a Boggart, turning into what they all feared most in the world at that present time: revision.' Can totally relate to that feeling man! Well written- keep writing!

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