Wow. Just wow. This story is stunning. I am speechless. I thought it was great the way you ripped holes in our knowledge of Teddy. You made me think 'do I even know this character at all?'. And then, such a sad ending. I can not put into words how amazing I thought this was! Well done! 10/10 BTW how is the Moony Eyes Xmas Special coming along?Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I don't really know where this one came from in my head, it just needed to be written I guess. And the Moony Eyes Christmas Special is coming along slowly, but it IS coming along, I promise! Report Review
Simply beautiful. Poor Teddy :'( This was really unexpected. Love it.Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) Report Review
My mum's sitting opposite me right now so I can't cry but boy do I feel like it.
So. effing. sad.
I'm going to go cry in bed with some chocolate biscuits now because that was super emotional.Author's Response: Aw, thanks! :) I'm glad this story is still being noticed. It may be a little one-shot I wrote in about 15 minutes, but I'm still proud of it. Thanks a bunch! Report Review
didn't expect that
that was really good
=]Author's Response: Thank you! I kinda just winged it ;) Glad it didn't suck! Report Review
Wow... I like the way you describe the scene and relate the moon to Remus. The ending was sad but you worded it beautifully. :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wanted to do something different from what I usually write, so I decided to go for a darker note. I'm glad it didn't turn out like crap! :) Report Review
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