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Reading Reviews for Karaoke Nights
  
8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by slytherindraco Cheater

13th March 2012:
James is so sweet, I love it. Hmm... I feel a fierce loyalty to Zach. Why? Well, my cousin and best guy friend is named Zach (he even spells it the same!) and I always feel this weird fierce loyalty and need to defend anyone who's named Zach. Even a fictional person. I know, I have major problems. Anyways, great story and keep it up! Zach, you are an amazingly wonderful cheating bastard. Your charecter, not my cousin... yeah I think I'll stop writing now...

Author's Response: hahahahhaha! thats so funny! thanks for reading!

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Review #2, by ginnyrulz Cheater

12th March 2012:
so then do so! we don't care! but good job

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Review #3, by Madam moony classes

14th June 2011:
For a dong can you do pictures to burn or who says

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Review #4, by ... classes

20th March 2011:
MORE MORE MORE !
This is really good so far and I want to know what happens:)

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Review #5, by Destiny dreaming

30th July 2010:
I really like the story keep it up! :)

Author's Response: Thank You!

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Review #6, by Destiny 

30th July 2010:
It seems really good so far I like it

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #7, by Hayleekins 

19th July 2010:
ha ha i liked it, it sounds like it could become a good story... Just some tips:
1) Paragraphs: If you add more paragraphs, it can help the readers understand more of what you're trying to say, and it doesn't looks so jumbled. Every new idea or topic should be split up
2) Check your spelling and grammer again. Some things don't make much sence, with out the right use of commas, and periods. "I nudged his leg to more like kicked hey at least it got him awake" sounds a little messed up. "I nudged his leg, or more like kicked his leg... hey, at least it got his attention!" or something would have worked better
Sorry this is so long! Just some tipz!
~Hayleekins

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much!

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Review #8, by marauderqueen 

20th June 2010:
Hah this is good but maybe if you put spaces between in some paces it would be easier to read.
I think this is a good idea though and you should keep going!

~Izzy
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Author's Response: Thanks SO much! Your my first review!

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