Reading Reviews for My One Good Mistake
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Review #1, by Capella Black Preface

17th August 2010:
NICE! I love the way you gradual build up the suspense, before revealing the big surprise at the end. Everything about the way the plotline is revealed in this is both clever and natural sounding, and it pulls the reader right into the action, desparate to know what's coming next.

There are a few typos you might want to clean up - "her apartment was a sTate", and "I hope to * you'RE happy now", but otherwise the technical stuff was all great too.

Really hoping that there's more coming soon. Gryffie love!

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Review #2, by preppy_arteaga Preface

25th July 2010:
Wow.really good. update soon?

Author's Response: Thanks, yeah I'm kinda in two stories at the moment, as in the other one on my page, but I will come back to this, I need to re-edit my first chapter but yeah it will go up sometime. :)

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