I like it, but wizards in the Potterverse dont use computers. Report Review
I love your story, however i have a question is Clary based off of the Clary from mortal instruments?...if so maybe you could have Jace and Clary be her parents or something!.but great job keep up the good workAuthor's Response: She's not like Clary from The Mortal Instruments. But I did get her name from there because I love the name Clarissa. And thanks I really appreciate the reviews. Report Review
I like it so far. You've got my attention. :) one thing to point out, at the end of this chapter Remus should probably say that he was a professor or that he was the DADA professor. It's a small thing so no big deal. Report Review
Great beginning! Hope you update again soon Report Review
Love it! She's funny when she's excited. Report Review
Really good chapter dont let the lack of reviews get you down either! They dont usally pick up till the fifth chapter so just keep posting! Update frequently and go into detail with explantions things will be fine! Update Soon, Alayna Report Review
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