That was such a good story :) I had a few tears in my eyes at the end and not many stories make me cry so well done :) It is true how Lily seems forgotten in the world and what she did for Harry. Obviously Harry would never forget but still.. quite sad :(
I felt sorry for Sirius in this story and the guilt he has to live with. I'm pretty sure Sirius never forgave himself for what happened and it shows through the story you wrote.
our writing techniques are good and the story is gripping because it makes me want to keep reading, to find out who is telling the story, find out what their story is, what has happened to them etc. I really enjoyed it so well done :) Added to favourites :D oh, and 10/10 :)Author's Response: Aw shucks, you've gone and made me red! This is one the best reviews I've ever gotten! I kind of think with all that time to think by himself in Azkaban, Sirius would have just gone over and over and over those last few years in his head . . . breeding guilt and maybe finding clarity. I wanted to give insight into his head. I'm glad you think I did that. I love using those techniques! I hate knowing automatically who's head I'm in, so I force my readers to pick up on it themselves. :) Thank you so much for the awesome review!
- Lemon Report Review
Nice take, well written, and your right Lily's sacrifice was what gave Harry the power to take on Voldermort, but he became a hero.Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I just love reviews, especially ones fraught with content. :) Report Review
this is so sad... Extremely well written but so so sad.
Congrats and i am going to go cry in my corner now.
James2009Author's Response: Aww . . . I'm sorry I made you cry! (And I'm even more sorry that your tears meant I did my job . . . ;) ) Thank you so much for the complements and review!! Report Review
OMG! This is all so true! I love this. Great Idea too!Author's Response: Thanks for the review (and the complements)! ~ Lemon :) Report Review
Terms of Service
categories & genres
short story collection