Please either update or let us know you've abandoned, I've waited almost a year. I hope you update soon, it would be a shame to leave such a great story. Report Review
PLEASE update! I've been waiting for MONTHS! Report Review
plz plz plz update i just love this story!Author's Response: I'll try to update it as soon as possible. I've been on a long personal break, which is why there haven't been any updates. Report Review
Oh my. When I read that she was dead, my heart literally dropped. I was speechless. I actually almost cried during this chapter.Author's Response: I actually cried when I wrote the chapter, so I'm glad that the emotion reached you. Thanks for the review. :) Report Review
I felt bad this only had one review, so, here goes.
I like your story, that's whyI keep reading it... but there seems to be a lot of inner family relationships... I know Roxy isn't really related to James, since she's adopted, but it still is really weird. They grew up as cousins. I guess it's not THAT weird, because people still marry their cousins, but yeah. it'd still be weird if a brother and sister got married if one was adopted.
Oh, do you know about that guy? I don't know his name, I saw it on tv, he's some celebrity or other, anyways, he and his wife adopted a baby from china and when she grew up he, the father, married her. Is that not terrible? Adopted or not, he raised her, changed her diaper, gave her baths...I don't know, gives me the creeps...
this is no where near as creepy, just a little odd. Oh well, it's entertaining anyways! I am now going to read the next chapter!Author's Response: Yes, that is very creepy. I hadn't heard that story. Anyway, the possibility of Roxie/James is nothing I plan to pursue. It's simply a coping mechanism for Roxie. Report Review
Overall, this is such a beautiful story! I'm hungry for more! PLEASE UPDATE! Much love XAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! Life is awfully busy, but I'll try to update as soon as I can. :) Report Review
AH! :( Sad! I don't get why this makes it Mature though..Author's Response: If there's suicide, the story must be rated Mature and carry a Strong Violence warning. Its one of the rules... Report Review
I love this! Update soon, please! (:Author's Response: Thanks! I will soon, I promise. :) Report Review
I LOVE this story!!! I cried reading the letter that Fleur sent to Dom.This chapter is the best out of all of them. Update soon, pretty please!Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! :D I actually cried when I wrote that letter, so I'm glad it was able to make you emotional as well. There shall soon be another update. Report Review
OMG. fleur! the letter was really sad. wow. more soon please!Author's Response: Yeah, but writing the letter was my favorite part. I'm glad you enjoyed the twist, though. :) Report Review
Why did you have to kill her??? er. pretty decent story tho..:)Author's Response: Honestly, it was a spur of the moment idea when I was writting out the plot. But I kind of like the emotional drama. Thanks for the awesome review! :) Report Review
wooot! another chapter!! wooow theres so much insanity in dom's life.
more soon please :)Author's Response: There will definitely be more soon, and there will be even more insanity in the next chapter. Thanks for the read and review! :) Report Review
Omg this is SO good and I'm glad nate will be back :) please upload the next chapter pronto. I'm looking forward to reading it :) xAuthor's Response: I'm almost done with the next chapter, so it'll be up soon! Thanks for all of the lovely reviews! Report Review
Amazing, yet again :) :) :) xAuthor's Response: Thank you! I appreciate it! Report Review
I was actually screaming "no! No! No! No!" In this chapter. It was SO good :) xAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much! :) Report Review
Aw... Poor dom. I personally think it'll be easier if she stuck with nate however she really does love teddy xAuthor's Response: Yeah, she's in an awful predicament, isn't she? But I guess we'll see what happens... Report Review
Aw nate is so sweet to dom. I Author's Response: Yeah, he's pretty awesome, isn't he? Report Review
Aw lovely :) I'm loving this story so much :) xxxAuthor's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! :D Report Review
I love this so so so so so much! :)Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! :) Report Review
Wow! This is rlly good! :) xAuthor's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
I hate Dom. She needs to sit down in a room by herself for as long as it takes to figure shit out. She needs to not be with anyone for a while. Oh my god. Teddy, I hate him. I think he's annoying and selfish and he just needs to be with no one for a while and sit in a room and figure out what the hell he wants. Aww, poor Nate! :( Good job. And I'm looking forward to more of this ridiculous nonsense. :) Report Review
No no no no no no no no,ohhh come on please no Dom/Teddy! How can she love someone who is a comple JERK(and that's saying it nice)? I still can't understand how anyone here can like Teddy?! He could save a bus full of orphans from a fire and I'll still think he's the scum of the earth in this story.Author's Response: Teddy is definitely one of those people that you want to punch, isn't he? But like I said, Nate will still be involved in the story... Report Review
ahh this story is so goood (please update soon!!)
i cant believe shes still in love with teddy its so stupid hopefully she stay's with nate!
teddy is a dumbass who swears he loves dom but wont leave vic cause he promised he'd marry her ughh he's an asshole
p.s. why cant dom just get over teddy if that happend dom wouldnt suffer, hahha but then there would be no point in the story right Report Review
Oh my god. I don't know how i feel about this chapter. Please update soon! It was really really good!
NatalieAuthor's Response: Well, I'm glad that you still enjoyed the chapter. And there will be another update soon, I promise. :) Report Review
NatalieAuthor's Response: Yeah, a bit of a twist, isn't it? But I'm glad that it shocked you. :) Report Review
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