st122: You have a very creative way of designing your story lines. You kept the story simple but not simplistic. It had just enough of a twist and an edge to it to keep my attention. It was a sweet story. Thanks for another fun ride. Well done. PWAuthor's Response: Thank you, I can't really say that I explicitly go out to achieve a seemingly simple story with layers, I guess that is just how my mind works. I'm glad you liked refuge and I hope you read 'Questions'. Thanks again! Report Review
Lovely!! Just Lovely!! I would so-o-o-o enjoy a 48 hour refuge if I may, please?
So like H/G, I think it was a wonderful idea. I am especially glad that you filled it with so much romance and did not mar it with smut. Good balance between the family's concern but not panic, and I thought a very believable twist to Hogwarts knowing when someone needed a refuge.
Thanks for an enjoyable one-shot, 9/10. ~Lauraf68Author's Response: I enjoyed writing this challenge story. Thank you for reading and commenting on my stories. I really appreciate it. Report Review
A very touching and heartwarming tale! I really enjoyed this. Wonderful job - a true work of romantic art!Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to comment and read. Report Review
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