What?! Love the story but what?! I thought the slash was going to be between Ron and Harry! Boy was I wrong! I was as wrong as Hermione!

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yes i know it's a story but it has to have some sort of realism in relation to the world of hp. would harry really just like admit to loving draco in front of everyone? would hermione, after doing all that work for the polyjuice potion which takes a whole bloody month to make, just drop her love for draco? wouldn't she be pissed as? i'm not trying to be mean i'm just being honest.

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wow this was terrible - sorry.

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Aw! Cute. I just love Harry and Draco they are so adorable.

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That was sweet. Poor Hermione, but I'm glad Harry and Draco are happy.

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Ahhh, so this is the first time that I have EVER read a slasher fic, and I was very scared, I can't lie! However, I enjoyed this, I like your writing technique, and I liked how it was down and to the point, I think this has the potential to be a much longer story if you wanted it to be, but it is also spectacular left as it is.

For my first slasher fic, I am very impressed, 9/10! Good job!

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What?!?! Didn't see him wanting to talk to Harry. Very nicely written, however. "spelling the cauldron clean"...lovely use of words. Never have I thought of using "spelling" as that type verb. Loved it!

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