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Review #1, by Debra20 Reflections from the Other Side

7th August 2011:
Oh my, this is quite an interesting insight into death and the beyond. The mysterious style in which you wrote the story is very evoking. It really forces one to imagine what happens when you die.

I loved Tonk's thoughts. They seemed to jump from one thing to the other. How she was still concerned about the ones she left behind, but not in the same way and intensity as she felt when she had been alive. It seemed more distant. As if she was talking about someone she didn't know.

She also seemed more insightful. Like trapped in a strange place she couldn't quite understand but accepted nonetheless. It's not always easy to imagine and describe the events in the afterlife, and the way you described them seem very real and possible. In the end, who knows what's out there?

House Cup 2011, End of an Era Review Extravaganza
Forum name: Debra20
House: Gryffindor

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review and for the feedback!! I really appreciate it, and I'm glad that you found truth in this, because I really was hoping to sort of unveil (pardon the pun) the limbo of death that I think the wizards face 'behind the veil'.

Thanks so much again!!!

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