this was dead cute, I loved whole thing! I was sure he was going to ask her to marry him but I thought the result was even better, very fitting of the characters you developed. well done on the story, I thought you captured the emotions of occasion and characters really well! :)Author's Response: Aw thanks. I really wanted to write a Dom/OC and it was quite funn ^^ Report Review
Lovely darling :D I liked that it wasn't all fluff and the "we work perfectly together" kind of thing. I've never been able to pull that off :/ You did it extraordinarily well though!
-CaitlinAuthor's Response: Hello love,
Thanks so much for the sweet comments. I'm glad you liked ;). And you do better than you know.
-Lindsey Report Review
Well first, congrats on the graduation!
Secondly, this was great!
I loved Dom and the others. It was funny when Ginny and Molly yelled at George and James at the same time. Like mother like daughter, eh? ;)
And Ron, that was a nice touch. Hermione obviously won't change at all!
10Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it Izzy. Report Review
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