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Reading Reviews for Summertime

2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by marauderqueen

18th June 2010:

That was great and so sweet. Well written, attention to detail, no major grammer or spelling mistakes, strong characters and good plot. My dream story!
I love Louis! Such a sweetie
~Izzy
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Author's Response: Aw thanks so much :) I did try and make it short & sweet. This is my first time playing around with Louis as a character, I'm glad you like my version of him. I also think of him as this sweet kid.

Thanks for the wonderful review & reading, of course :)

becca

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Review #2, by shatteredxlolli

She acts like Summer

10th June 2010:

I think this was lovely and a beautiful interpretation of summer. The first paragraph reeled me in and I couldn't stop. Even though you didn't launch into loads of detail, I could still visualize the scenery and imagine how the characters were feeling. The true essence of a one-shot. =]
(Oh and the no dialogue made it that much more intriguing!)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much :)

I thought a Summer one-shot was needed since Summer is just around the corner right now, though I honestly abhor one-shots usually.

I'm glad you noticed/ liked the lack of dialogue! I thought it was more of a Louis telling his whole story to one person.

Your review was wonderful, thanks for reading & reviewing :)

becca

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