I really like it! I hope you continue on with this, and fast :) Report Review
Another fantastic chapter, I found it really quite moving. I really hope Harry gets things sorted soon. 10/10 Report Review
Harry kinda seems too much like a pedophile in this chapter...Author's Response: Awe, I'll re-read it and see if I can't edit it. I wrote it a while back, so I'll review it and see if I can't fix that, thanks! Report Review
i'll check back in on this one, i hope you update fast. :DAuthor's Response: I hope I do, too! I actually had a hard time getting chapter 4 validated >.> Report Review
ha-ha! i laughed on this one! Report Review
going good so far, i like it! Report Review
A fantastic chapter of a great story. I love H/Hr and I can't wait for the next chapter :D 10/10 Report Review
Wow! It usually takes me a few more chapters to fall in love with a story, but this seems to be the exception. I absolutely love this story and can't wait to see what you have in store for this story. Patiently waiting for the next chapter. Report Review
wow veery nicely done i love how u have all the backstory and all the emotion to to it and made me think of my own relationship and i know how she feels Report Review
nice story! cant wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thanks! For some reason, everytime I upload a new chapter, it never actually does so. I'll figure out the problem soon! :D Report Review
Oooh I'm sooo looking forward to chapter three. I wanna read Hermione's reaction.Author's Response: Lol. I put chapter three on the validation list today! :D Report Review
An interesting start, I like it.Author's Response: As I hoped you would1 :D Report Review
that was really good. I like how the conversation flowed between harry and hermione. It seemed like something that would happend between the two of them.Author's Response: I'm trying to keep it to where it would be something that could happen :D I am glad you think I am portraying it! Thanks! Report Review
The start is good! You mention Draco, I am wondering what mix match you have in mind... LOLAuthor's Response: Lol. I'm posting chapter two on Saturday! Keep an eye out for it! Report Review
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